ManSellingMoons
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- Feb 3, 2014
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Around 750 words or so. I've got interesting feedback in the reviews. Overwhelmingly people have said I needed to flesh out the story a lot more.
Any feedback from you guys will be helpful.
https://www.literotica.com/s/fire-34
Any feedback from you guys will be helpful.
https://www.literotica.com/s/fire-34