Feedback Needed: Valentine's Day Contest

Bebop3

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Hi,

So, I wrote something that's odd, very different from the other stuff I'm writing and has some dialogue that is highly stylized. I was going to enter it in the Valentine's Day contest (knowing full well that it will tank).

Can I be objective? Absolutely not. I definitely need other eyes to take a look and offer some feedback.

If you wouldn't mind reading it over (it will be less than two Lit pages long) and offering your general opinions, I would appreciate it. Please shoot me a pm if interested.

Thanks!
 
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