Hi guys,
So, I decided to try out a certain program that rhymes with mammary... I fully understand the limitations of such things. Anyway, it spat something back from my first sentence that's thrown me for some reason. I'd appreciate your opinion.
'Cool, clear water lapped around his ears as he floated, basking in tropical sunshine. He could feel it, hot on his eyelids, and perfectly warm on his pleasantly full tummy.'
The suggestion is that I need a THE in front of tropical. I can see that it fits in there, but is it necessary? Is it a must? The examples I'm finding on the net don't seem to quite fit and I'm starting to feel like a bit of a boob myself.
Thanks for any assistance!
So, I decided to try out a certain program that rhymes with mammary... I fully understand the limitations of such things. Anyway, it spat something back from my first sentence that's thrown me for some reason. I'd appreciate your opinion.
'Cool, clear water lapped around his ears as he floated, basking in tropical sunshine. He could feel it, hot on his eyelids, and perfectly warm on his pleasantly full tummy.'
The suggestion is that I need a THE in front of tropical. I can see that it fits in there, but is it necessary? Is it a must? The examples I'm finding on the net don't seem to quite fit and I'm starting to feel like a bit of a boob myself.
Thanks for any assistance!