tomlitilia
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I've completed a group sex story (FMMM) and would appreciate someone having a look at it before posting it. I'm mainly looking for someone to check for spelling/grammar mistakes and potentially spot logical flaws and inconsistencies. Since the story is written from the woman's perspective, I think the story would benefit by having a female pair of eyes on it. My stories are usually quite well received, but I know there are a few mistakes in them, and I'd like to avoid that.
It's about 17000 words.
It's about 17000 words.