Request For Editor | Fan Fiction

Hello

I am a new writer, requesting help from an editor. Here are my story details:

Genre: Fan Fiction (Mass Effect)
Story: ME3 ending re-write (male Shep+ liara romance)
Length : 7177 words
Help requested:
Voice, pacing, dialogue.

I am pretty sure I have taken care of most spelling and grammar issues.

I bot not get offended from direction or suggestions. I am trying to learn

Please let me know

Thank you
Saul

As a fan of Mass Effect, i could help, but you'd have to wait a week, unless you can get somone else to look .