Beta reader needed for 1800 word FFF threesome story (part 1)

I have about 1800 words written so far in the first part of a 3 chapter story .

I am looking for general feedback on the subject matter and "plot" and whatever else you may want to comment on .

I’d like to write 3 short stories describing three threesomes I have had. Those all occurred in my younger days before I settled down.

The first story is half written (got to a good stopping point) about a FFF threesome.

Newbie

Hey. Im new here and i dont have much experience but id be willing to try and help you out and read it over
Beth