So, recently I decided to stop being annoyingly anxious and actually submit a story. It’s the first thing I’ve ever written on my own, and definitively longer than anything I’ve written before. It had a rocky start but the story has been well-received after that. I have received about a dozen comments, and a lot of votes, so I have some idea about what people think.
The comments I’ve received are nice and very appreciated, but they aren’t very constructive.
The only detailed feedback I’ve received is from my editor, and I decided to make a thread here and ask if anyone would be willing to help me become a better writer by telling me what was good and what was bad. Also I’m hoping that this thread will help me decide whether to write a sequel or not.
Anyway, a bit about the story without trying to spoil too much: it’s a long, 40.000+ word work, in the Lesbian category, with a slow build-up, written in first person. It’s nothing especially kinky or unusual, I made the protagonist’s emotions and personality the main focus of it, and her relationship with two women, one young and the other older. Most of the sex is condensed at the end of the story.
https://www.literotica.com/s/pavlovian-reaction-1
The comments I’ve received are nice and very appreciated, but they aren’t very constructive.
The only detailed feedback I’ve received is from my editor, and I decided to make a thread here and ask if anyone would be willing to help me become a better writer by telling me what was good and what was bad. Also I’m hoping that this thread will help me decide whether to write a sequel or not.
Anyway, a bit about the story without trying to spoil too much: it’s a long, 40.000+ word work, in the Lesbian category, with a slow build-up, written in first person. It’s nothing especially kinky or unusual, I made the protagonist’s emotions and personality the main focus of it, and her relationship with two women, one young and the other older. Most of the sex is condensed at the end of the story.
https://www.literotica.com/s/pavlovian-reaction-1