LF Editor (M/S Incest)

Story is 4300 words. Mainly looking for editing regarding plot, story flow, narrative structure. Should be few if any grammatical errors as I meticulously self edit. I think the story is pretty good but I firmly believe you can always learn from others.

What is LF?

HeyAll said:

What is LF?

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In this case it very likely stands for 'Looking For'