I posted my first story and am looking for some constructive criticism/feedback on it. It is a cross dressing story.
https://www.literotica.com/s/a-boiled-frog-pt-01
I have gotten some very positive feedback and great comments, as well as some haters, but none of the comments have had any constructive criticism or even told me what they liked about the story. Since this is my first story ever, I was hoping for some insight from a more experienced writer on what I could have done better.
Thanks in advance,
Noobdude
https://www.literotica.com/s/a-boiled-frog-pt-01
I have gotten some very positive feedback and great comments, as well as some haters, but none of the comments have had any constructive criticism or even told me what they liked about the story. Since this is my first story ever, I was hoping for some insight from a more experienced writer on what I could have done better.
Thanks in advance,
Noobdude