Gasp, Moan, Whimper: what to do about verbs?

J_R_Ashunwhy said:

lol.
"By the prickling of my thumbs, something wicked this way" cums.

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Ah, good old Nuclear Assult I loved that albumKant

lovecraft68 said:

I just finished a sex scene where a witch has sex with another witch and fucks her with flames. That way I got to use crackling, sizzling, shimmering... a whole new set of sexual 'ings'

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Sounds like the witch got that pussy roasted or charbroiled by the time the sex scene was over and I bet it was a scorcher to readKant

Kantarii said:

Ah, good old Nuclear Assult I loved that albumKant

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Yes, but I was pulling from the 'witches' from Shakespeare's Macbeth.

"double double toil and trouble, fire burn and cauldron bubble"

ObTopic: Write whatever verbs (and adverbs and adjectives) seem appropriate. Then read the passage aloud. If you don't laugh or groan at yourself, or choke or gag, then you've done okay... unless you WANTED readers to chortle or choke at that point. Does it pass your own sniff test?