she is a 5 feet 7 inch tall with 34 d bra size and 30 waist size. She has round ass and a virgin ass hole, her hair is black and pussy is trimmed.
Need a story on my GF
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here it is then...
I would like to see her in BDSM with 4 men and having her virgin ass filled with hot cum and seeing her tears coming out of pleasure and pain.
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Agreed completely.
I've done a little of that sort of work, but it takes a lot of info to tailor it properly - a lot more info than what you have given. It also takes time and a lot of back and forth between writer and 'patron'.
Before we go any further, you say you are looking for a 'nasty' story. How do you define 'nasty'? Is it just a cute term for loving, romantic sexual activities or is it something like her hauling a 14-car train in some seedy motel?
The other thing - and don't take this personally - is what you intend to do with it. Is this to be a gift to her on a special day, something for you to treasure on slow nights? Because there's an elephant in the room, something which many might have considered, that being revenge porn. Boyfriend has been dumped by girlfriend, so he gets an anonymous writer to do something about her for the net, resulting in psychologists, cops and social media lynch-mobs. Ethics aside, that's not a good thing for a writer to undertake.
Firstly, I can answer all the questions if put up here or on PM...let me know.
Secondly, for me Nasty is seeing her tears coming out of pain and pleasure like you mentioned her hauling a 14-car train in some seedy motel.
Third, I am still with her and these stories to make her arouse and open for such incidents for us to take our sexual pleasure to different level. There is NO revenge here at all.
Hypoxia
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I wrote your story for you in post #23. The rest is embellishment.
legit story...with some nice plot
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Lots.
I would suggest that you sample the stories of some of those who have responded here and decide which ones you - and, critically, your GF - both like. Then PM them to get the ball rolling. Spend some time setting up an agreement as to how the story is to be written, then stand back.
You may have to try a few writers to find one with interest and time, but it's entirely possible. Broadcasting here is less effective.
Good luck.
"Who's that barfly?, I've seen her in here a lot."
"Which one? The place is full of them."
"The black haired chick with the rack."
"Don't know her name, she's got a trimmed pussy though."
"What, how do you know … "
"Never mind, just stay away from her."
"Why's that?"
"Weird personality. Last week, just before closing, she stood on a bar stool, ripped open her shirt and announced she wanted to pull a train. The place went mad. She stripped, bent over the bar counter -- right about where you're sitting -- and took 10, maybe 15 guys right in her ass. And that includes a bottle brush and a tall boy. A real human flesh light. Got showered in beer, too. What a mess. Epic performance though."
"No shit? Seriously? Why?"
"She's got some douchey boyfriend she wanted to show up, or something. Revenge? Quien sabe?
"Which one? The place is full of them."
"The black haired chick with the rack."
"Don't know her name, she's got a trimmed pussy though."
"What, how do you know … "
"Never mind, just stay away from her."
"Why's that?"
"Weird personality. Last week, just before closing, she stood on a bar stool, ripped open her shirt and announced she wanted to pull a train. The place went mad. She stripped, bent over the bar counter -- right about where you're sitting -- and took 10, maybe 15 guys right in her ass. And that includes a bottle brush and a tall boy. A real human flesh light. Got showered in beer, too. What a mess. Epic performance though."
"No shit? Seriously? Why?"
"She's got some douchey boyfriend she wanted to show up, or something. Revenge? Quien sabe?
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SEVERUSMAX
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You decide that you want her to try going into porn, she does, you decide that you regret it after she gets a lot of extra action even offscreen and loves it, she dumps you, and you both move on?
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Bottom line? Get on with it.
OK, here’s where I see this.
You started this last summer, looking for somebody to write a story. Since then:
In short, looking at this from the outside, none of it seems to have worked for you. From somebody sitting outside your head, it’s starting to look like you’re getting more out of discussing the possibility of maybe eventually finding a potential author who might be able to write a story which might please you on some as-yet undecided terms – all that, as opposed to just finding an author and getting your story. I mean, that’s OK, we all have our thing, but if you want to find a writer, honestly, there are better ways. Like Gamina says, just put out a commission with one writer. Stop dipping your toe in the water and just jump in.
Good luck – sincerely.
OK, here’s where I see this.
You started this last summer, looking for somebody to write a story. Since then:
- You spent a month debating the exact definition of ‘experienced’.
- You have - when pushed - given some more details about what she looks like.
- By November of last year, you got around to describing the scene you’re interested in having included in a story.
- It’s been suggested that this isn’t the right place for you to find an author; alternatives have been given. It’s been suggested that you go to a genre you like, browse some authors until you find one whose style you like and PM them.
In short, looking at this from the outside, none of it seems to have worked for you. From somebody sitting outside your head, it’s starting to look like you’re getting more out of discussing the possibility of maybe eventually finding a potential author who might be able to write a story which might please you on some as-yet undecided terms – all that, as opposed to just finding an author and getting your story. I mean, that’s OK, we all have our thing, but if you want to find a writer, honestly, there are better ways. Like Gamina says, just put out a commission with one writer. Stop dipping your toe in the water and just jump in.
Good luck – sincerely.
ElectricBlue
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Plenty, but clearly, as TP explains, none are interested in your request. You seem to be flogging a dead horse.
Maybe you should have a go at writing it yourself?
