LaRascasse
I dream, therefore I am
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- Jul 1, 2011
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I'm reminded of clients who spoke schizophrenic word salad garnished with loose associations and tangential accents.
Fire your editors.
Finally my recalcitrant eyelids opened, letting in blinding light.
Is this a parody of a style I should know but don't?
If it is it is truly brilliant; if it isn't then its a bit wordy- don't you think? A little over the top.
Finally my recalcitrant eyelids opened, letting in blinding light.
Is this a parody of a style I should know but don't?
If it is it is truly brilliant; if it isn't then its a bit wordy- don't you think? A little over the top.
Finally my recalcitrant eyelids opened, letting in blinding light.
Don't know who Perfideous is razzing for writing this sentence (don't know if it's from LaRascasse or JBJ), but it looks fine to me--certainly bringing forth better, more interesting images than "I opened my eyes to the light."
This isn't at all what I would consider to be purple prose--certainly not something to highlight for criticism on the forum.
I read the sentence you were criticizing. You picked out a sentence to criticize. I found nothing wrong with it.
Maybe you're just trying to seem smarter about writing than you are.![]()
So you still haven't read it.
I picked a sentence at random-they're all pretty much like that- as an example of the style.
Once again I see you're into the put downs.
Feeling safe there sweetheart?
Do something other than snipe and we'll see how good you are.
You posted a single sentence as an example of something. I reviewed the single sentence as an example of something. I disagreed with you on what the single sentence represented.
I think you're the one who is sniping--and starting the name calling.
God Perfideous, I'm sorry but you're an insulting bitch, you know it? You slam the shit out of people, insult them, and then you fucking whine when it gets thrown back at you.
Either suck it up, or shut the fuck up and move on already.
Right back at you love muffin
As for why I posted? Uh, I guess because I can?
Who needs a funny story when you can look at this thread?
Well hello to you sweet heart.
What prompted that? Have you read the posts as they appear?
So, once again what prompted that little hissy fit?
Who needs a funny story when you can look at this thread?
He's Pilot's coarser alter ego.
Nah, not really DR doesn't seem to have any claims to greatness.
I think he's a groupie because the majority of his posts are on threads Pilot posts on and he always takes his side.
Pilot has 3 "friends" here, this guy with his penis extension AV and adoration for the word fuck(disappointing lack of creativity)
MistressLynn who for some reason runs around backing up everything he says and
Pennlady, but I'm not sure she counts because she's nice to everybody.
No, wait he has another, but I think that person is more of a crush because every time he posts Pilot shows up to yes sir him to death and give him the posting equivalent of a blow job.
Everyone else either has him on ignore or fights with him.
in fact I'd be grateful if you could leave this spat out of your comments and comment on his story.
It is, after all, why he posted the thread in the first place.
He's Pilot's coarser alter ego.
Nah, not really DR doesn't seem to have any claims to greatness.
I think he's a groupie because the majority of his posts are on threads Pilot posts on and he always takes his side.
Pilot has 3 "friends" here, this guy with his penis extension AV and adoration for the word fuck(disappointing lack of creativity)
MistressLynn who for some reason runs around backing up everything he says and
Pennlady, but I'm not sure she counts because she's nice to everybody.
No, wait he has another, but I think that person is more of a crush because every time he posts Pilot shows up to yes sir him to death and give him the posting equivalent of a blow job.
Everyone else either has him on ignore or fights with him.