Old 01-07-2018, 04:14 PM   #1
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Believable moms

What situations would serve to show a credible mom interested in her son?

How could it be made believable from her perspective?
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Old 01-07-2018, 04:45 PM   #2
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What situations would serve to show a credible mom interested in her son?

How could it be made believable from her perspective?
Most mom/son stories are way too fanciful, if not outright idiotic - but imagining a credible situation is also not so easy.

- the son is ill or recovering from an accident; the mother nurses her son, takes care of him as he recovers;
- after a nasty break-up with his gf because she cheated on him with his best friend, the son is devastated; he becomes quite withdrawn and his grades start to go down; the mother tries to comfort him out of his cave, trying to convince him that not all people are like that;
- the son achieved something significant - sporting event, scholastically, acceptance into Ivy League school and the mother dotes on him, shows him off to her friends, and she starts to notice that many of them are checking him out, she starts wondering what do they see that she doesn't;

There seem to be some stereotypical "motherly" traits - nursing, comforting, doting - ways of treating her children that brings her closer to them in an abnormal time...
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Old 01-07-2018, 04:53 PM   #3
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The cliched lonely mom, who's divorced or husband died and takes comfort in her only son.

Or husband doesn't show much attention to her. She sees the amount her son shows to his wife... Things transpire, accidental flashes of forbidden skin, doors left slightly opened while undressing, and before you know it son has mom on her hands and knees while she eats out her daughter-in-law.
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Old 01-07-2018, 04:56 PM   #4
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good ideas

I like the ideas.

Have thought about a college senior football player who blows out his knee. He's had previous knee problems, so they tell him that's it. No more. Ruins his chance at going pro he'd worked his whole life for.

She comes to care for him for a week while he sits around medicated and devastated. Full of despair. Even treat her like shit some.

Something develops between them.
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Old 01-08-2018, 08:04 AM   #5
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I guess my believability threshold is low, but I suspect that is the case for many Lit readers.

I submit that all it takes is Mom to be sex deprived and then get a good look at son's cock- maybe hard or semi-hard- for first time since he was little. She is amazed by the size, and finds she can't take her mind off of it....
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Old 01-08-2018, 08:21 AM   #6
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Mom Friendly Stories

I've never published as I only write with the intent of being read as a script for an audio story. I have also been re-thinking how I write to create a more immersive story. I am a huge fan of 3rd person JOI style videos. Even better if my mother is only referred to in the third person. But there is a glaring gap in narrative style for stories and video...

MOM FRIENDLY TABOO! Instead of hearing "your mom's so hot", what about "Your son makes you so hot"? Even if there aren't many moms out there, I would find it hot to listen to a JOI style narrative talking my mother through her desires.

To write a story with punch on every line forget a beginning-middle-end format. Too much waffle! I have begun to think of it as a spoken/written internal confession or more simply a sequence of statements that have standalone WOW factor. The trick is overlaying strands covering-
  • physical/emotional sensations fantasized about
  • Motherly concern over habits growing towards shared lust
  • Memories relived
Making it more real means being specific to each individual. It's best to use your own memory or take a hunch on when your mum was tempted. Take a kernel of truth and exaggerate! Here are some of mine...
  • He noticed you staring at the bulge his trousers!
  • Walking in on your son naked/wanking! You were hoping to catch a glimpse of his..
  • Knowing he gets off seeing you naked, but you went topless all day on the beach anyway. Knowing your sons eyes were staring at your boobs behind those mirrored sunglasses you got him.
  • Wrestling him on the ground to squeeze his zits hoping your son wouldn't feel your mound rubbing against his body
  • You know your son sniffs your panties? imagine your sons sniffing the knickers you're wearing right now. Wiping yourself with your knickers and carry on putting them there for him to find
  • Giving him valentines day cards telling him how handsome he is. He must have taken the hint by now
  • When you saw his life-drawings you could have stripped off right then. But would it be a step to far to pose naked for hours for your own son.
  • Shocked to find your photo under his pillow? Well who's the one using her hairbrush handle while she stares at her son's graduation photo?
  • Overheard her on phone saying the bra-fitter touched her up
  • Ex-wife describes licking mum while you fuck. Ex-wife tells her how hot I am in bed. Ex-wife raids wash to show you how wet the idea makes mum
  • Take for granted every time she points out a woman's beauty, she wants her!

Once I have a script ready for recording I'll publish (with names removed) Problem is I'm such a perfectionist can't garantee when that'll be.

If any "moms" would like to read some for me I'd love to hear.
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Are your audio stories on Lit?
No, sorry EquinoxRising. Fear of reprisals from 'voice artist', as personal use is always stressed. Also, to become more immersive and to assure personal I use real names. If that got into the public domain!?!?!?

EquinoxRising, are there volunteer 'voices' to be found here? Is it a matter of publishing and hoping someone will offer? I do a lot of post-production of recorded scripts. Mixing two voices, leaving gaps and sound effects. My preference would be to get a volunteer to record and send so I can edit to publish. Suggestions?

I'd be happy to publish an audio story (with changed/removed names) if I could find someone to voice????

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Old 01-19-2018, 11:18 PM   #9
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What situations would serve to show a credible mom interested in her son?

How could it be made believable from her perspective?
Its not the situation, its the mom. If you scan the incest threads you'll find that this desire is real life for some people. The situation could be altogether mundane, but if you can capture the willingness, desire and conflicted feelings about what is going on, you'll accomplish what you're thinking about.
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You could have a scenario about a helicopter mom...someone who is always there for her son. Maybe the son is shy and finally gets her first girlfriend. It ends up not going well and he gets dumped, which plunges him into a deep depression. His grades suffer and he withdraws even further inward.

Eventually, mom finally gets her son to open up as to why the relationship failed. Her son begrudgingly explains that his girlfriend dumped her because he was bad in bed. She even mentioned that his kissing skills were non-existent.

Being the helicopter mom that she is, she convinces him that he just needs some tutoring. At first, her naive son doesn't understand what she's talking about. "How can I get a tutor for that?" He wonders to himself. He comes to the realization of what his mom was talking about when she nonchalantly pulls him in and plants a kiss on his lips. Her son's eyes go wide with shock. When the lingering kiss ends, she says, "Now that I know what I'm working with, let's begin."
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Or the son has mental problems due to a bad accident, his wife or gf leaves him due to the accident and mum decides to care for him and bring him back to health but theres side affects and she puts up with them because hes her son
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EquinoxRising, are there volunteer 'voices' to be found here? Is it a matter of publishing and hoping someone will offer? I do a lot of post-production of recorded scripts. Mixing two voices, leaving gaps and sound effects. My preference would be to get a volunteer to record and send so I can edit to publish. Suggestions?
I'm not sure off hand. I haven't heard of any.
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Old 01-21-2018, 01:34 PM   #13
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MOM FRIENDLY TABOO! Instead of hearing "your mom's so hot", what about "Your son makes you so hot"? Even if there aren't many moms out there, I would find it hot to listen to a JOI style narrative talking my mother through her desires.
Yup, the usual missing elements...and what makes it worse is how a 40something mother is made to appear like a 24 year old porn star.

The best stories are those in which a boy gradually begins to feed his mother's sense of the forbidden..and this isnt done by talking. Its accomplished with prolonged eye contact, leaving certain buttons undone, walking out of the shower VERY slowly dripping water off a nicely sculpted musculature, an innocent embrace slipping under the influence of subterranean forces, a gentle kiss on the nape of her neck.

Gradually, the mother feels the need to seek her son's approval...as she begins her descent into a realm only dreamt of in hushed whispers.
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Old 01-21-2018, 03:06 PM   #15
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No, sorry EquinoxRising. Fear of reprisals from 'voice artist', as personal use is always stressed. Also, to become more immersive and to assure personal I use real names. If that got into the public domain!?!?!?

EquinoxRising, are there volunteer 'voices' to be found here? Is it a matter of publishing and hoping someone will offer? I do a lot of post-production of recorded scripts. Mixing two voices, leaving gaps and sound effects. My preference would be to get a volunteer to record and send so I can edit to publish. Suggestions?

I'd be happy to publish an audio story (with changed/removed names) if I could find someone to voice????
volunteer voice potential? pm me if your serious

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Yup, the usual missing elements...and what makes it worse is how a 40something mother is made to appear like a 24 year old porn star.

The best stories are those in which a boy gradually begins to feed his mother's sense of the forbidden..and this isnt done by talking. Its accomplished with prolonged eye contact, leaving certain buttons undone, walking out of the shower VERY slowly dripping water off a nicely sculpted musculature, an innocent embrace slipping under the influence of subterranean forces, a gentle kiss on the nape of her neck.

Gradually, the mother feels the need to seek her son's approval...as she begins her descent into a realm only dreamt of in hushed whispers.
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Incest, in general, isn't on my radar in real life or as a writer, but the OP's question made me curious. I did a quick search for the prevelance of Mother/Son incest and this is just a sample:

What about mother-son incest?

Weíve had some lurid cases, but they are rare. It happens in single-parent families where the mother is divorced, the older boy takes over the duties of father, and then the sexual responsibilities as well. But a boy of 18 would really feel he was betraying his mother if he turned her in, whereas a girl of 18, who canít support a fatherís sexual demands on her anymore, finally blurts out her story.

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The actual rarity of the event in "real life" makes it that much harder to make it believable in fiction.

So, in my mind, it seems that it would be far more believable if the entire story was set in another time, another place kind of thing. Say; A frontier era family where the father is killed... or, a lost on a deserted island situation (Tom Hank's in Castaway finding emotional support from a basketball). Anyway, that would make the whole situation far more believable, in my opinion.
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what if the son is born disabled and he is frustrated and miserable because he is afraid that do to his disability that he will Never! have sex.

so in a gesture of kindness and compassion his mother offers her body to him.
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what if the son is born disabled and he is frustrated and miserable because he is afraid that do to his disability that he will Never! have sex.

so in a gesture of kindness and compassion his mother offers her body to him.
To me, this seems like one of the least believable scenarios.
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