First time author looking for beta-reading and editing
I just finished my first attempt at writing fiction. The full story has 50k words, I intend to post it in five parts.
I have two requests:
Does the story make sense? Are there any logical breaks in the story line? Can a person who hasn't read the story understand what is happening? Things like these.
English is not my first language. Therefor I feel that I have used certain verbs and adjectives a bit too often, some support here would be greatly appreciated.
I have spell and grammar checked the story. I know the difference between there, their and they're. I do not think that there are many errors left but...
Also there are some errors word has difficulties in detecting (to/too, quite/quiet, prepositions, etc.)
And last but not least the tenses. Did I used past tense when I should have used past perfect? Or past continous?
Last edited by Kojak01 : 02-13-2017 at 03:53 AM.