LovingTongue, my one piece of fiction here at Lit is written in the first person. I try to write as I honestly experience sex, oral or otherwise.
From The Predicting Game - Please read and comment! His finger slowly traveled across one sweet cheek into the dividing valley and slowly over the other buttock. Without a word, he did it again. Again his finger traced the lace edge of her panties where her bottom was revealed. He appeared to be emphatically underlining his discovery. Kate held her breath, every muscle in her body tense, waiting for his reaction.