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11-07-2009, 04:16 PM	#1
Themoodyone Experienced Themoodyone is offline Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: New York Posts: 46	Feedback on "Send" much appreciated, teetering on 4.5 Hello fellow Erotica writers and enthusiasts. I would be very greatful for some feedback on my first Novelette "Send". First two chapters posted, third will be up soon. Looking for my red "H" Advice needed. Thanks in advance. "Send" click to read Last edited by Themoodyone : 11-07-2009 at 09:04 PM.

11-07-2009, 07:34 PM	#2
MistressLynn . MistressLynn is offline Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Lost Posts: 30,011	You'll get more help if you post a link to your story. We're a lazy lot here. __________________ Most Helpful Editor 2008 My page "You have a passion, a joy. You have a sadness, a vulnerability. Both darkness and light. But that doesn't make you gray. You have a joy of life and celebrate it. Sex too. Guys like sex. You think of yourself as sexual and sexy. But not as a flaunt, just a part of that life you enjoy." The_Fool

11-07-2009, 08:45 PM	#3
Themoodyone Experienced Themoodyone is offline Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: New York Posts: 46	Thanks! Here it is. "Send" Let me know what you think. __________________ New to Lit, but graduated to experienced. Looking for feedback and criticism on my writings. I would love to know your opinions, insight and advice. Bad girl mascarading as good, a theme in my writings and personal life. Take a look into my world. SEND My first novelette

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