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Old 11-06-2009, 06:17 PM   #1
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lickjen writes again
i am brand in here, and have not written any poetry in 5 years

turn the world and back

as moist as cool spring rain
with heat of winters fire
just a touch of pain
awakens the desire
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Old 11-06-2009, 06:44 PM   #2
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Hello and welcome are you looking for critique or just doing your own thing?
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Old 11-06-2009, 06:52 PM   #3
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hi
just saw there was a poetry section, and what do you know i started writing
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Old 11-06-2009, 07:25 PM   #4
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Good for you glad to have you aboard I'm Annie one of the few Brits around here
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Blessed are the cracked for it is they that let in the light
They say a smile is a gift which is free to the giver and precious to the recipient.
But giving the finger is free, too, and I find it more personal and sincere.
If at first you don't succeed....skydiving is not for you ....
If you don't pay your exorcist .... do you get repossessed?
I shall always decide not to decide, unless of course I decide to change my mind.
....But I, being poor, have only my dreams, I have spread my dreams under your feet,Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.......
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Old 11-11-2009, 05:55 AM   #5
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i am brand in here, and have not written any poetry in 5 years

turn the world and back

as moist as cool spring rain
with heat of winters fire
just a touch of pain
awakens the desire
desires open hunger
open hunger
wild, untamed
all is to be claimed
open to the yearning
drowning in the feast
energised unknowing
freedom in release
Jen!

You have normal socially acceptable talents!?!?
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Old 11-12-2009, 08:06 PM   #6
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hmmm, this domestic godess has a few talents......
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Old 11-12-2009, 09:10 PM   #7
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hmmm, this domestic godess has a few talents......


Yeah but being able to suck a golf ball through ten feet of garden hose is not the type of thing that comes up at the dinner table....
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Old 11-13-2009, 01:24 PM   #8
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suppose that depends where you go for dinner
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