BORED WITH fictions? READ facts!

[BrianCaster]

I have weaved true experience for my attempt to find God.

You also find the situation of Indian Railways. my some days in hermitage, my question to God, practice of Brahmacharya and my worthless search for love. All came direct from my heart. No added other spices.But you may find some problems in my writing. However I hope, my innocent writing catch your !!!

One day I turn my path to God, but fails
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[BrianCaster]

My another real essay is "My Fake Friend". In my whole life, I first time felt during 12th standard that, whithout someone, near my heart, I couldn't pass my life. I have no love of dad. I lost interest in life. So chose friend. Last he tuned out to be fake.

[BrianCaster]

May this excerpt force you to read "My fake friend". It is still virgin, means doesn't get a single vote!!! Read it NOW and experience something different. At end I put its link.

" During night I wished that in embracing position, we slept together without any clothes on our body and we enjoyed sex! I wished that he kissed me whole night till I became wet! I wanted to see him naked and what types of brief he wore! I wished to take bathe with him and rinsed each others body! I wished that we cut each other’s public hair!!! I wished that we would enjoy the life till last breathe of our life! I never wanted to part with him. But it never became true. I hadn’t enough courage to propose him for live with each other." -My Fake Friend

[BrianCaster]

I write a essay about my mad love for underwear, my first experience of masturbation and much more. If you don't one topic, you can choose other as I give different experience, a different title. These all you find in "A Spicy Hotchpotch of Indian flavour". Just click on the bottom of this essays name.

Readers, who interested in young's psychology, must read. It open new horizon of your thinking.

What haven't I done to make my reader read my essays?

--Just write good and there isn't need for any other tricks

[BrianCaster]

I have got very strange and affectionate response with advising tone of "My fake friend". Who is this?
How old are you?
11/09/09 By: Anonymous
And why are you submitting this here? Perhaps you should be visiting your English teacher and asking for advice and critique. This isn't the place to perfect your language skills. Have you considered submitting in your native tongue? Well, don't do that either, because minors are not supposed to be allowed to submit. If you aren't still a teenager, you are giving a very good impression of one, even with your weak language usage.