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09-23-2009, 01:58 AM
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Revenge of Rome: Female Writers Challange(d)
Looking for a Female writer for writing the following character:
Rome, now the mighty Roman Empire, after a series of bloody and sheer brutal battles, has won a decisive victory against the barbaric gauls. Now is the time for revenge, revenge for the fallen, revenge for roman blood, revenge for defiance. And so, the time has come to take our due share. And by the orders of the emperors,the Gallic cities are now to be plundered, their women now be counted as ours, and all the barbaric gauls to be sold into slavery. None shall be spared, not one soul, this is the moment of revenge. And for all the soldiers who fought these mighty decisive battles, as a mark of gratitude and a sign of respect for their heroism, enough gold is to be given so that these heroes could buy any woman they please, do anything to her and then buy some more. To commemorate this victory, a week of celebrations is to be gifted to the public and following the grand Triumph Procession on the first day, the spoils of war are to be sold to the public so as to raise money for the armies which brought this triumph. The most anticipated items of all spoils are of course the women which are to be sold as slaves in the grand market, some on big delightful stages, others on dirty roadside stalls. This market has never had, nor will have any censorship, so the women can be presented as the dealer likes and nothing against these women is forbidden, neither any limits apply to any age or sex. This is, a grand slave market, at its finest.
You are one of the gallic girls/women captured and brought to be sold in the market, straight from your sweet home. I am a former Roman army captain, strolling through the market, looking to "rewind" after a hard fought war.
I will of course buy you and put you to good use as I expect full value for my money. You may of course expect some serious brutal behavior, atleast in the beginning.
NOW Here's the challenging part.:
You are to create this scene of how the slave market looks like, how are the women dressed up, the sounds, the hubbub of people around, the fear in the eyes of these new slaves and the glint of joy in the eyes of buyers. Most specifically the kind and number of women and their description matters tremendously. You may begin by describing whatever you want but ultimately the scene should focus on 5 or 6 women, all having different physical features. Their descriptions should be given a priority. Then I get to choose what I want after you have described what each looks like. And after I buy you/the character chosen, the fun begins. What I do to her is dependent on what the character is like, maybe the character might get her skirt ripped off on the roadside itself, before we get "home", with wild and frantic thrusts in her virgin little ass as she cries for help, or maybe she gets cleaned up and pefumed first after reaching so called home and then I tell her in a clear concise voice why she has been bought and try making love to her or beat her till she submits.
There is no clear path on how the story would progress, so I guess there's a lot of fun in it. However, as I said you must be okay with some beatings or the regular rape which is sure to follow.
I know this may sound like a challenging writing task, but once the fun begins, I am very spontaneous and this may be better than meets the eye.
Now the final word, PM me here, all I care about is that you should be a good female writer. So, when you PM me, Include the description of the slave market and the girls as I said. Then in my reply to you, I shall choose the character I like and from there we shall proceed to our rapid firing messenger (If you are ok with messengers, that is).
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09-23-2009, 06:41 AM
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Before anyone flames me - I know this response is highly critical. I am trying to get over to RB what it feels like to be on the receiving end of a request like this.
Well now, you are asking a lot of your co-author. I think you should make it clear that you will credit her when you post the story, or go to Online Role Playing if all you intend is role playing.
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... You are one of the gallic girls/women captured and brought to be sold in the market, straight from your sweet home. I am a former Roman army captain, strolling through the market, looking to "rewind" after a hard fought war.
I will of course buy you and put you to good use as I expect full value for my money. You may of course expect some serious brutal behavior, at least in the beginning. ...
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This is all fairly routine stuff - there are quite a few stories like this on Lit and elsewhere.
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Originally Posted by Raging_Bull
... You are to create this scene of how the slave market looks like, how are the women dressed up, the sounds, the hubbub of people around, the fear in the eyes of these new slaves and the glint of joy in the eyes of buyers. ...
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I don't understand why the female co-author has to do this; are you too busy/idle to do the research yourself?
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Originally Posted by Raging_Bull
... Most specifically the kind and number of women and their description matters tremendously. You may begin by describing whatever you want but ultimately the scene should focus on 5 or 6 women, all having different physical features. Their descriptions should be given a priority. Then I get to choose what I want after you have described what each looks like. ...
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She has to create five or six different characters, so that you, the lord and master of this writing "partnership" can choose the one you want? This is a story ideas forum, not a slave market.
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... And after I buy you/the character chosen, the fun begins. What I do to her is dependent on what the character is like, maybe the character might get her skirt ripped off on the roadside itself, before we get "home", with wild and frantic thrusts in her virgin little ass as she cries for help, or maybe she gets cleaned up and pefumed first after reaching so called home and then I tell her in a clear concise voice why she has been bought and try making love to her or beat her till she submits.
There is no clear path on how the story would progress, so I guess there's a lot of fun in it. However, as I said you must be okay with some beatings or the regular rape which is sure to follow. ...
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If you intend to define your co-author's reactions, then there is no point in her contributing.
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... this may be better than meets the eye. ...
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I hope it would be, for your co-author's sake.
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... Now the final word, PM me here, all I care about is that you should be a good female writer. So, when you PM me, Include the description of the slave market and the girls as I said. Then in my reply to you, I shall choose the character I like ...
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Is this a one-way audition, or will you offer your ideas for approval also?
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... and from there we shall proceed to our rapid firing messenger ...
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This is such a bad idea; stories (good ones, that is) are developed with much care and attention to detail. I doubt that "rapid firing messenger" could produce anything worth reading by anyone but the participants.
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... (If you are ok with messengers, that is).
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09-23-2009, 08:44 AM
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Cant you read or what, this needs female authors, period.
And, If you find this so offensive and repugnant, it might be a good idea if you refrain from providing your overtly moralistic and ever so just views, just staying away would be better..... Rather than using your so valuable time in offering these lessons of morality and justness to the world, now might be the right time to find something u can do to pass your time, who knows you might even find a life.
Why in the world you feel so bad about an author doing all the work you would never do anyway. You know some people actually love what they do, and finding something of that sort makes them want it more..
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BTW I think I might have already found the right author through this posting in my PMs. You see, thankfully the world is not all priggish like you.
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09-23-2009, 08:49 AM
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What he said, because quite honestly what I am seeing happening is she writes everything up and you simply say suck my dick bend over for a fucking and so forth while she types it all out. I've done cyber sex, it's not all that great on her end.
I'm going to point out something, co authoring means that both put roughly equal amounts of time into writing the story. What you want is a woman to slave herself to your story idea, write up most everything and then play your own personal sex slave, which means she probably does almost all of the writing. That is very not co authoring, that is more along the lines of I wrote this with some idea from him. 
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09-23-2009, 10:14 AM
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oh, why do I wade in, when snoops can defend himelf if he cares?
RB, your comment directed at snoops,
"...Rather than using your so valuable time in offering these lessons of morality and justness to the world, now might be the right time to find something u can do to pass your time, who knows you might even find a life.
Why in the world you feel so bad about an author doing all the work you would never do anyway. You know some people actually love what they do, and finding something of that sort makes them want it more..."
is just illfounded. Snoops is a prolific professional writer. He has posted selective works on the main Literotica story side - awfully generous for a guy who gets paid for writing - by real publishers.
In addition, he is a regular and wise forum contributor - for terchnical reasons, he changed accounts a while back, so he has actually been around a lot longer than it appears, and posted more as well.
He is generous with his time and advice, and though he was admittedly harsh with you (and I know that must sting), his stature should not be slightted.
Dissing snoops accusing him of not knowing writing is like dissing Hubie Brown's basketball knowledge - I might dislike Hubie's style, but would never overlook his accomplishments.
Congratulations on finding a collaborator. I hope your story works out well.
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09-23-2009, 10:26 AM
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*snorts*
Some men online put the word "lazy" on completely new level.
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09-23-2009, 01:34 PM
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*snorts*
Some men online put the word "lazy" on completely new level.
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Amen there.
Raging_Bull,
When you post anything publically online it is there for the whole world to see. You cannot say "men, don't reply here" no more than you can "if you are wearing a green shirt you may not reply since I hate the color green!"
People will post where they want. Some many come in only to "flame" you or make fun of you, some may offer constructive criticism, and some may have advice. (Some may come in here to only say "Hi Snoopy!" or "Hi Sirhugs!" - and they may get a slap on the wrist from Risia. Some may say "FO we don't like you!" and, again, get a slap on the wrist for not being ON TOPIC.)
Point is, you will get all kinds of replies from people at Lit. If you don't like it, you have one of two options. Be mature and offer your opinion back regarding what was said, OR act like a child and insult those that post a reply.
How you act and carry yourself will directly change, mold, modify how others interact with you at this web site. Like it or not, but you've received some good advice on how Lit is ran (going to the SRP board or jointly writing and submitting chapters with a co-author) and opinions of what you are asking from a female author.
I'd say good luck on finding said author.
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09-24-2009, 12:23 AM
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I hate to say it Raging Bull, but as a published female author on lit, I have to agree with snoop. Creating 5 other characters that won't be used is a lot of work, and this definitely sounds more like a roleplay than a story to be published. If I were to join you on a task like this, I'd expect to be publishing under my name, with giving you credit given that it sounds like I'd be doing most of the work.
I honestly envision a collaborative story happening in a different matter than you forsee. Good luck finding a female writer who will join in this task.
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10-13-2009, 05:25 PM
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My goodness! (Blush) I would have just said, "No, thanks" and moved on. What are all the flames about? I think it's a cool idea.
Back in the days when men were men, and women and children were spoils of war. I used to fantasize about being Princess Kristianne and being captured by the evil Black King. I suppose I'll get flamed for that, too, but anyway, I'll play...
Love,
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10-13-2009, 08:51 PM
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My goodness! (Blush) I would have just said, "No, thanks" and moved on. What are all the flames about? I think it's a cool idea.
Back in the days when men were men, and women and children were spoils of war. I used to fantasize about being Princess Kristianne and being captured by the evil Black King. I suppose I'll get flamed for that, too, but anyway, I'll play...
Love,
Kristie
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The idea of the setting itself is fine. What's being flamed is the way he's asking to go about it. Basically, instead of "hey, would someone write this story for me" he's asking, "Do all this work creating a bunch of different characters fully fleshed out. I'll pick one of them. Then you write a story for me. Oh, and I'll publish it under my name and if you're lucky, I might mention you in a note at the end.
So it really came across as "do all this work so I can have my name on a story"
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10-14-2009, 11:20 AM
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Oh.
Well, for me, if it's hott, it's hott, and if it's not, it's not. Writing isn't work for me, anyway.
Love,
Kristie
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10-18-2009, 10:45 PM
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What are all the flames about?
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By no means were the replies in this thread flames. They're far from it at this web site!
As for the actual WHY in your question, though? Just like you, every member of this web site has the right to voice their opinion.
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10-28-2009, 04:18 PM
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The idea of the setting itself is fine. What's being flamed is the way he's asking to go about it. Basically, instead of "hey, would someone write this story for me" he's asking, "Do all this work creating a bunch of different characters fully fleshed out. I'll pick one of them. Then you write a story for me. Oh, and I'll publish it under my name and if you're lucky, I might mention you in a note at the end.
So it really came across as "do all this work so I can have my name on a story"
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Hey I don't intend to publish anything here! The only thing I am interested in publishing is what I am working on in school. This is just about a sexually gratifying thing for me and thats all it is, do whatever u want with the text u get and keep the credit, I will even write a comment for u in the comment section. Hell No, I think I got misunderstood. I don't want no credit. Just my share of pleasure and If some girl finds this hot and wants to play, then good, if not, move along no problem. And its not like I did not receive any replies so far!! To each one his own, I guess...
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10-28-2009, 04:19 PM
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Same Here!!
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10-28-2009, 04:21 PM
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By no means were the replies in this thread flames. They're far from it at this web site!
As for the actual WHY in your question, though? Just like you, every member of this web site has the right to voice their opinion.
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Can't agree more, but,,,, edit ,,voice their opinions without anger or abuse to anyone else herein.
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