Old 09-17-2009, 05:14 PM   #1
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I must be getting rusty on the whole fiction writing thing. I keep messing up the timeline. Too much fetish for flashbacks, so now it seems like my peeps have memories from two parrallell universes, where things happened in different order.

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Old 09-17-2009, 05:16 PM   #2
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go for it, it will give the critics a shitload of analytical chewing gum
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Old 09-17-2009, 06:23 PM   #3
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I must be getting rusty on the whole fiction writing thing. I keep messing up the timeline. Too much fetish for flashbacks, so now it seems like my peeps have memories from two parrallell universes, where things happened in different order.

Buggrit.
Milllenium hand & shrimp. I told 'em

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Old 09-17-2009, 06:29 PM   #4
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Pterry has another character that says "millennium hand and shrimp"-- a certain Mrs. Tachyon, in his "Johnny Maxwell" series. I surmise he actually heard someone say it once... or thought he did...
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Old 09-17-2009, 09:43 PM   #5
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go for it, it will give the critics a shitload of analytical chewing gum
LOL. I like that idea. You can always tell them you meant it that way
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