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He looked down at the naked young woman laying on the bed. It wasn't his bed but it was in his home. He had prepared a special room just for this occassion. He was going to warp and twist the occupant of this room into his perfect woman. Someone as shallow, materialistic and vain as he himself was, and with a sex drive to rival anyone.

He looked over her naked body, her modest breasts would definitely need enlarged, and the enkempt bush of pubic hair would definitely have to be dealt with eventually. At the moment the patch of hair glistened wetly as a vibrator buzzed away happily in her pussy. She was sedated, so there was no way that she would awaken before morning, no matter how many orgasms the toy brought her.

He knew she was an honour student, with a full scholarship, and that she was on the Dean's List due to her success so far in academics. That just made what he was going to do to her all the more fun.

With her full scholarship, money hadn't been a problem for her, and so she hadn't needed a job. But that was the first thing his process was going to change in her mind. She may not have needed money, but some spending cash wouldn't hurt, and so she would now be able to remember getting a job only a few days before.

Adam left the girl alone spread out on the bed as the warm moist night air brought out a slight sweat to her skin. The next morning would be interesting.

She wouldn't know how she had gotten wherever she was, the last she would remember was accepting a ride from a man in a luxury car. After that it was all a blur.
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Kimmy had been working so hard, all her life. Grades were everything.

She'd left home straight after high school to live at the college dorms; her parents were both surgeons so after she'd left, she never heard from them. They had sent her a Christmas card, but had forgotten her birthday..typical them...

She was pretty, but her friends always complained to her that she didn't make the most of her natural beauty. She was a brunette; her long, slightly-wavy dark hair reached all the way to her lower back, just above her pert ass. She had big blue eyes, clear fair skin and long, dark eyelashes. Her pink lips were envied by many, and that was even before they looked at her long, slim legs and flat stomach.

Her breasts were flat though, and usually she didn't give a damn about how attractive she looked. She was always too busy working to think of breast-enlargements or hair dye. Even on the last day of the Spring term in her college - which was yesterday - she'd been anxiously re-doing a paper instead of going home..

It was really late by the time she'd got outside, it was dark and she was tired. When a car had pulled up and asked if she needed a lift, all common sense had left her and she'd clambered in eagerly.

...after that...what happened..?

Slowly but surely, the fuzziness in Kimmy's head cleared so she was able to sit up. She felt turned on somehow, and her lower body was tingling wildly. She looked around desperately to know what, but then she realised - where was she..?

Then she decided to investigate..ohh..!

She reached her hand down onto her soaking pussy, pulling out a vibrator. She switched it off, nervous and scared..what was happening..?
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The sound of the lock on the door releasing was heard softly a moment before the door itself opened. Adam walked in carrying a large silver platter with a domed lid on it. He set it down on the bed next to Kimmy and lifted the lid to reveal a large breakfast.

"Good morning, Kimmy. My name is Adam and I'm your Host here." She may recognize him as the man from the car the night before, if she wasn't still groggy.

"You may be wondering where here is, but I assure you that you are in absolutely no danger at all. I'm simply going to give you a better life than the dreary one you had before... But to do that, I have to make a few changes."
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Kimmy looked at him; she wasn't as drowsy as before, thanks to her shock of realising she was somewhere she didn't recognise..

She vaguely remembered his face, but the memory swam away from her, and her mind was left spinning trying to think. Shaking her head, she gave up. Then his words sank in.

"W-what do you mean?!" she yelped, looking at him nervously. "I...I liked my life..yes..but, I mean..what kind of changes..?!"
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"Oh I'm sure you did like your life. I'm sure someone could like a hamburger from a fast food restaurant but that doesn't mean filet mignon isn't better." He smiled at her. "I wouldn't worry too much about what changes. You won't even notice, and in the end, you'll be much happier. I promise."

He sat down in a chair a short distance away. "Please, feel free to have breakfast. And I would love for you to tell me about yourself. University must be interesting, though expensive. Do you have a job to support yourself?"
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She started to pick at the food, not feeling particulary hungry..

"Yes, I got a job a few days ago.." she mumbled as she quickly swallowed a mouthful of food. "Why?"
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He shook his head. "No reason other than I am trying to get to know you." He smiled warmly at her.

"But you'll never have to work a day in your life again. Of that I promise you. For now I am going to have to keep you here, in this room, but later you will have the freedom to roam my entire estate. You'll never want for things to do."

He stood then. "But you probably want some privacy, and time to think. I'll leave you alone for now. Feel free to use anything you find in this room, and there is a very well appointed bathroom right through that door." He pointed to the door across the room. Beyond it was a luxury bathroom with a hot tub, and all the rest you would expect to find in a bathroom of a mansion.

The rest of the room was rather ordinary, there was a large scroon plasma TV facing the bed, but all it would play was soap operas, the home shopping channel, fashion shows, and porn.

There was also a wide arrangement of sex toys, of which her new friend the vibrator was one, and the only reading material in the room was fashion magazines and the like.
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Smiling at him awkwardly, she mumbled a polite thank you as he stepped out of the room. She heard the door close firmly..and then a small click of a lock. Trapped.

She stood, looking at her surroundings in awe. Tasteful decoratings, she had to admit, with soft carpets and long, elegant curtains - like a fairytale. As she scanned the room, she knew she should be worrying about her parents. But the fact was, they probably wouldn't even notice she'd gone. Sighing, she turned to go to the bathroom, resigned to the fact that no one was going to come look for her for at least a few weeks..if not months..

The bathroom was as beautifully furnished as the main room, and she gaped at the gleaming surfaces, the huge, expensive-looking bath and the huge mirror that spread over the top-half of the back wall. Looking at her reflection, she gave a little shriek of shock and embarassment - she was naked! How hadn't she noticed before?!

She looked at herself; her nipples were hard, her pussy still looking wet from her earlier date with the vibrator. Actually, she'd forgot to ask him about that - and now her clothes?! She shuddered at the thought that he could of raped her..she couldn't remember anything of the journey..and she had woken up with nothing on and with a switched-on vibrator making her wet, even as she slept..

She forced these thoughts out of her mind - she'd ask that man all her questions later. Deciding she definitely needed a wash, she ran a small bath, pinning up her hair with some hair pins she'd found in a drawer beneath the sinks, and sank into the hot water blissfully, washing herself gently as she relaxed.
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Exploring would show her a large walk in closet full of clothing that was either form fitting, see through, scanty, or some combination of the three. But she would not have to go naked.

He brought her three meals a day, all lavish and delicious, and talked with her a little bit while she ate, only to leave her again.

The next stage of her changes occurred that night. Rather than simply deciding to get a job recently, she had felt the need to have disposable income much sooner, having taken a job as a bartender at a nice bar a few months previous. A new desire to shop and splurge on things prompting her to get this job.

The next day she was still confined to her room, though she didn't really want for things to do, it was more an issue of wanting to do the things that were available. The next night brought even more changes. University was a whole new sense of freedom for her and she went a little wild. Her grades weren't as good as they maybe could have been but she wasn't at risk for losing her scholarship. She was still studious, but her social life had become much more important than it was in High School. Her job as a bartender was something she really enjoyed and let her meet a lot of fun people. Since coming to school she had slept with a couple different men, but she was still somewhat discriminating.

Adam arrived with lunch that day, after waking her up earlier with breakfast. "Lunch time, Kimmy!" He called to her as he came in, not looking to see if she was in the room or in either of the two adjoining rooms.
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Kimmy walked in immediately, dressed in denim shorts, black stockings and a black top. She casually yawned as she stepped through, but her eyes lit up at the sight of food.

"Yaayy!" she said happily, dashing over and choosing her food carefully. Her clothes were different, more sexy, but still didn't reveal much. However, the stockings and shorts showed off her legs and her tight top stretched over her breasts. She was becoming aware of her natural attributes..and she LOVED them.
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He smiled at her attitude as he came in. "Well someone is in a good mood today. I'm glad to see it." He frankly hadn't expected that so soon, but different people cope in different ways. Maybe Kimmy tried to make the best of things.

"I hope you're finding everything alright? Is there anything else I can get for you to make your stay here easier?" He paused for a moment. "I can't let you out yet... soon, but not yet."
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Kimmy was feeling different today, more than usual. Her memory of working hard and her joy of getting top grades were faded, like an old photograph, with new memories of partying and drinking being so much clearer. She had a faint idea that this should disgust her..but she pushed away that nagging feeling. She wasn't going to dwell on things she couldn't change.

Ever since then, she'd found it easier to let old, treasured memories be forgotten and to focus on remembering the good times with her friends. She felt more relaxed..happy..why had she felt so tense before?

That nagging feeling came back, but she pushed it away firmly.

"Oh, okay.." she sighed. Her rooms were good, but she'd like to explore more.
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"Oh don't look so glum. I just need to be sure you aren't going to try to run away on me. That would ruin a lot of planning and work, and I don't want to risk it just yet. Later, when you are further along, you'll be able to leave." He smiled, not hiding in the slightest that he was changing her. But he didn't mention how she was being changed.

If she worried about it and took stock of herself, she would remember the new memories as nothing strange, and that would simply cement them even further into her mind, now that they had been cleared by her subconsious.

"But let me make it up to you, if you want something, just let me know and I'll bring it if I can."
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She smiled; her smile hiding her lurking confusion to what was her exact purpose for being here. It was all so complicated..was this all official? Being filmed? She had no idea..

"No, I don't want anything at the moment.." she decided, flicking back a strand of her dark hair. Sitting cross-legged on the bed, she had an urge to watch another fashion show. She'd never realised how interesting they were before...
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He sat down next to her. "You know, I've never actually had a job before... Well, not one that wasn't in an office, with a secretary, and mostly about going to meetings... what's it like being a bartender? I bet it's really good for your social life. I bet you're really fun to hang around with."

It was time to start getting her immersed in her life, get her acknowledging the changes to her memories outwardly rather than simply in her head.
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"Oh! Well, it's so fun!" she immediately burbled, enthusiasm obvious. "You just get to meet all these people, and after 10pm on weekends you can have free alcohol yourself! And there's all these parties...unforgettable, seriously.."

These memories seemed so much clearer to her than others, even ones about family. She paused suddenly, thinking hard, her brow creased as she wondered..
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He watched her brow furrow as she thought about something. Obviously she was questioning what was going on, trying to puzzle out something that didn't seem right in her head. He began to wonder if there would be a more efficient method for her conversion. Making a mental note to check the feedback results he had logged for her previous nights later, he turned his attention back to her.

"But I'll bet that takes away a lot of your time from doing school work. It's a good thing you're so good in school that you don't have to work as hard to maintain your grades. I'm envious."

Already he was formulating a way to up the retention if he did indeed find that she wasn't taking in as much of the change as was optimal.
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He had turned the conversation onto safe ground; she still remembered parts of her education years. "I just work hard.." she replied. "Really, really hard.."

She sighed. "I can't remember how I found the time to pack it all in, but I must of huh?"
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He nodded. "It just goes to show what sort of a student you are, Kimmy. College is usually like that, I've found. Aside from the school work, you go a little crazy doing new things. Sometimes your grades suffer, but it's the successful ones that can balance it all out."

He put his hand on her arm. "I'll leave you to your privacy now... There are some things I need to look into and I'm sure you don't want to spend your day talking about boring stuff like school." Smiling, he left her alone, the door once again locking behind him.

The data that he had collected did indeed show that she wasn't absorbing the new memories as well as she could be. Some resistance was normal, but the progress was hampered by the fact the programming was being transmitted via sound while she slept. If he had a more direct line, the efficiency would be much higher.

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She flushed at his compliment; but she wondered herself how she had..sometimes, she had flashes of something that made her question herself, like sudden clashes of events that happened that she had a feeling happened at the same time...

But it was just her bad memory. At times like that, she just shook her head to get them all away. It would just give her a headache to think too deeply about it..

She waved as he left the room, the now familiar click of the lock coming straight after the firm sound of the door closing. Turning to the TV, she switched on the fashion channel and started to watch another fashion show, admiring the swirl of colours and patterns on the perfect female models as they walked elegantly down a long, glittering catwalk. She'd love to look like them. Perfection..
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While she watched TV, Adam was looking over the logs of her conversion so far. It was as he had suspected, the delivery method was impacting the absorbtion of the new memories. But he had an idea of how to get around that.

It would take him a couple days to get the necessary changes made to the system, so he left the current method running until he was ready.

The next morning brought new memories as usual. Kimmy had gone on a spending spree when she had first arrived at College, and had to get a job to pay for it all. She loved the way her new clothes and make up looked on her and always made sure to look her best. A few of her boyfriends had even bought her a few pieces of jewelry. She hadn't asked them to, but wasn't about to refuse if they wanted to spend their money on her.

Her social life took on even more levels of importance, and her grades were clearly suffering. She was at risk of losing her scholarship, but her parents were loaded so she wasn't worried about having the money to pay for tuition.

Adam brought her breakfast that morning, shortly after she woke up. "Good morning Kimmy... I bet you're loving not having to go to class anymore."
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Her head buzzed immediately at his question, but a smile sprung onto her face, slightly sheepishly. Even though she remembered not caring about her education, a part of her felt guilty for not giving it more attention. But it did feel so good not to worry about it all anymore..in fact, more than good. It was pure bliss.

"Just a little.." she admitted, sitting up in bed as she stared at the breakfast eagerly.
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"Oh come on... just a little? Are you telling me you didn't mind all that studying and work you would have had to do to maintain your grades? I bet you would have much rather have gone clubbing, right?"

He set the tray of breakfast across her lap so she could eat it in bed.
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She laughed, her cheeks flushing guiltily. "Okay okay, I admit I regret all that time I did do studying..." she replied truthfully, taking up her knife and fork and looking at the full tray happily. "I guess I'm a lot happier here..I think I am anyway..."
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He smiled at her in genuine happiness. "Kimmy, you have no idea how happy I am to hear you say that. Just for that, I'm going to give you a present. Would you like that?"

The present would be that he would take her on a walk around his estate. Showing her everything that she would have access to once he was sure she wouldn't try to run away. He hoped that would give her incentive. Not that she really had much to choose consiously. But the incentive would help with what he was planning on doing to her soon.
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