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Old 02-03-2019, 02:40 PM   #1
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Smile Editor needed: submissive cam girl dominates a peepers.

My latest story starts with a Cam girl who writes code for therapeutic reasons and hopes to finish her degree someday. One day, her and her boyfriend catch a stealth robot spying on them while they're having sex, with her bound and gagged.

They catch the creeper who sent it, and intimidate him into sexual submission, but it's her digital internet stalkers that she should really watch out for.

Kink are BDSM, Exhibitionism (obviously), and cock torture.

Story is drafted and clocks in at around 17k words.

If anyone is interested in doing a beta read, I'd appreciate it!
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Old 02-03-2019, 08:23 PM   #2
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Volunteer editor

I'm a volunteer editor if that is what you are looking for. I edit each story twice checking spelling, grammar, punctuation, sentence structure, consistency, plot and character development plus flow. If this is what you are looking for them contact me. I have no idea what a beta reader is.
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Old 02-04-2019, 12:44 AM   #3
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I have no idea what a beta reader is.
Once upon a time, in a land far away, I didnít know what a beta reader was so I googled. I got the answer within thirty seconds. It was easy. Even for me.
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Old 02-04-2019, 01:27 AM   #4
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Once upon a time, in a land far away, I didnít know what a beta reader was so I googled. I got the answer within thirty seconds. It was easy. Even for me.
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