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Old 10-26-2017, 04:51 AM   #1
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Editor's guidance wanted (Inc., oral)

I have written a story about a young woman who gets a job where she is obliged by circumstances to give her father a blowjob.

It's 5500 words and I have already checked for basic errors using Grammarly. Now I need real guidance from an editor on how to improve my story and how I can improve as a writer. I believe I have a reasonable appetite for strong critiques.
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Old 10-26-2017, 12:02 PM   #2
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If grammar is not an issue, i can skim for content. Email is in my profile.
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