Looking for editor to get me over a hump
I have a partly true story I am capturing about an encounter (moving into fantasy) I experienced with a much younger girl
Category - Mature
subcategories - incest (no actual incest but roleplay), interracial (not making a big deal of it)
I'm currently at 2500 words but as I go through it, I am not satisfied with my telling of the story. I expect to get to about 5-6000 words.
I'm looking for someone to help me make the story pop. I'd say, generally my grammar and technical aspects are good.
If you can help, I look forward to hearing from you.