Story: Battle Fuck

[spentbob]

New to CHYOO and having fun reading and contributing to this story. Some of it is much better written than other bits, but it's all fun. Any chance of encouraging more posters to this thread?

http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main.story.cover/6921

[spentbob]

Awesome new threads form Southpaw leading on from here -

http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main..../135636/119852

and here

http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main..../140318/119852

[spentbob]

Here's a rough text map of the ways you can go through the Battle Fuck building and the girls you can meet.
Hopefully we can keep it so it doesn't end up where you can loop and end up meetign the same girl twice.
Hope this reads okay and makes sense! You start with the front door girl and go down, or across in the arrow direction.
Guess this is a bit spoilery, so SPOILER WARNING.
(edit - map updated again, dec 1st 2013)
note - if it's not clear, Aurora (pentagram) leads on to felicity (feathers), but I couldn't manage to link them without "wrapping round"

 
     
                                  Front Door girl 
                                      (Sasha)
                                         |
                                         |
                     ----<------<--Black Rose
                    /               /    |                         
                   /               /     |                          
                  /               /      |                           
                 /               /       |                           
---<--Pentagram Door--<--Green Door-->-Red Door-------->-------Feather Door---<-----------
          (Aurora)          (Eden)      (Lady Lily)               (Felicity)             
                              |          | \      \________       /      \
                              |          |  \          ____\_____/        \______
                              |          |   \        /     \                    \ 
                              |          |    \      /       \                    \
                          Pink Door      |  Blue Door---->--Grey Metal Door     Lorena
                           (Peach)       |   (Alessa)        (Techno Girl)   (Edging Girl)
                                         |         |            \
                                         |         |             \ 
                                       Staff Only  |              \  
                                         Door      |               \
                                                   |                |
                                                   |                | 
                                              Tennis Girl    Wooden Door
                                              (Katherine)     (Natsumi)  
				               		            |
                                                                    |
                                                                    |
                                                                 Library    	
                                                              (Miss Parker)

[CarterRyanII]

It is a really interesting and fun story.

But some threads being better written than others is an understatement. The creator would really benefit from having someone proofread/edit his/her threads.

[Mathesar]

Here is an alternate map. As I understand it in order to fulfill Black Rose's proposal you have to defeat every girl. Unfortunately, it is not even possible to reach every girl. "Best" is the best I have been able to do. "Need" is a list (with a possible order) in order to fulfill Black Rose's proposal (as I understand it). The required extra links are (I think) obvious.

The story is obviously incomplete. Some girls can not be defeated (or even reached without backtracking, which I think is illegal).

(Well, I can't figure out the spacing. The map is in Courier and I'm trying to use a Courier new font for the remainder of the message, but I can't get it to work. I replaced the spaces with "." characters. It's not very good, but it is better than what I had.)


Front.Door.Girl.....................................................
(Sasha).............................................................
...|................................................................
...|................................................................
Goth.Girl...........................................................
(Black.Rose)------------+--------------------+......................
...|....................|....................|......................
...|....................|....................|......................
Red.Door--<----------Green.Door-----------Pentagram.Door............
(Lady.Lily)..........(Eden)...............(Aurora)..................
|..|.|............../.....................(Witch)...................
|..|.+------------------+-----------------+..|......................
|..|............../.....|.................|..|......................
|Grey.Metal.Door--<--Blue.Door--<---------Feather.Door..............
|(Goggles)....../....Pool.................(Felicity)................
|(Techno.Girl)./.....(Alessa).............../.......................
|..|........../......(Swimmer.Girl)......../........................
|..|........./..........|................./.........................
|..|......../...........|................/..........................
|..|......./.........Changing.Room....../...........................
|..|....../..........(Katherine)......./............................
|..|...../...........(Tennis.Girl)..../.............................
|..+-----------------------------------------+......................
|....../............................/........|......................
|Pink.Door...........Smiley.Face.Door.....Wooden.Door...............
|(Princess.Peach)....(Lorena).............(Natsumi).................
|....................(Edging.Girl)...........|......................
|............................................|......................
Staff.Only.Door...........................Library...................
(Mary.&.Sarah)............................(Miss.Parker.&.Assistants)

Best......................................Need
----......................................----
Sasha.....................................Sasha
Black.Rose................................Black.Rose
..........................................Lady.Lily
Eden......................................Eden
Aurora....................................Aurora
Felicity..................................Felicity
Alessa.then.Katherine.....................Alessa.then.Katherine
Goggles...................................Goggles
..........................................Princess.Peach
..........................................Lorena
Natsumi...................................Natsumi
Miss.Parker.&.Assistants..................Miss.Parker.&.Assistants
..........................................Mary.&.Sarah