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Old 04-25-2014, 11:15 PM   #126
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We get it, that's twice you said that you'd like to see the bully murdered by the nerd. I guess you think that's "righteous."
No, I don't think his girlfriend is his property. He has no ownership over her.
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Old 04-25-2014, 11:18 PM   #127
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I see the nerds dark act of murder and raw vengeance turning on his girlfriend who still loves him.
She sees him as masculine for once, bonding them tighter. He goes to prison but she's faithful to him & visits him.
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Old 04-26-2014, 02:38 AM   #128
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No, I don't think his girlfriend is his property. He has no ownership over her.
Neither is she the nerd's. Come on, sing it with me.

WILDFLOWER
by SKYLARK

She's faced the hardest times you could imagine
And many times her eyes fought back the tears
And when her youthful world was about to fall in
Each time her slender shoulders bore the weight of all her fears
And a sorrow no one hears
Still rings in midnight silence in her ears

Let her cry, for she's a lady (She's a lady)
Let her dream, for she's a child (Child)
Let the rain fall down upon her
She's a free and gentle flower growing wild

And if by chance I should hold her (If by chance that I should hold her)
Let me hold her for a time (Let me hold her for a time)
But if allowed just one possession
I would pick her from the garden to be mine (I would pick her from the garden to be mine)

Mm-mm-mm, mm-mm
Be careful how you touch her, for she'll awaken
And sleep's the only freedom that she knows
And when you walk into her eyes, you won't believe
The way she's always payin' for a debt she never owes
And a silent wind still blows
That only she can hear, and so she goes

Let her cry, for she's a lady
Let her dream, for she's a child
Let the rain fall down upon her
She's a free and gentle flower growing wild

Let her cry, for she's a lady (She's a lady)
Let her dream, for she's a child
Let the rain fall down upon her
She's a free and gentle flower growing wild
She's a flower growing wild
She's free


If that song's too "out dated," try SaltnPepa's It's none o yo business

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Old 04-26-2014, 03:07 AM   #129
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Explain the song please?
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Old 04-26-2014, 05:08 AM   #130
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Sorry loquere. Some things transcend explanations. If you seriously can't follow the previous exchange, then that sounds like a life's lesson you need to learn the hard way; by solving it yourself.

I could easily give you the answer, but knowing the answer and understanding the answer are two different things, and it sounds like you need to understand it, more than know it.
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Old 07-16-2014, 07:57 AM   #131
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Here is a story I wrote not too long ago, is not "exactly" what you're looking for, but contains all of the smae elements. Bullying, humiliation, nerdy guy loses hot girl to douchebag and fucking while he watches etc. I reccommend you give it a shot.

http://www.literotica.com/s/the-good...ys-loses-ch-01
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Old 07-24-2014, 09:57 AM   #132
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thats a great idea. my favorite type of story...
Did anyone end up writing such a story? if so, can someone please provide the link. And any links to similar stories.
dirtydan6969 i will check out your story.
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Old 07-26-2014, 09:20 AM   #133
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Here is a story I wrote not too long ago, is not "exactly" what you're looking for, but contains all of the smae elements. Bullying, humiliation, nerdy guy loses hot girl to douchebag and fucking while he watches etc. I reccommend you give it a shot.

http://www.literotica.com/s/the-good...ys-loses-ch-01
that.story.you.wrote.was.epic WOW
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Old 07-26-2014, 01:25 PM   #134
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This thread has been around for awhile now, anyone written this yet?

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Old 07-26-2014, 01:30 PM   #135
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Sorry loquere. Some things transcend explanations. If you seriously can't follow the previous exchange, then that sounds like a life's lesson you need to learn the hard way; by solving it yourself.

I could easily give you the answer, but knowing the answer and understanding the answer are two different things, and it sounds like you need to understand it, more than know it.
(1)Same ole bullshit.

(2)I'm 92.

(3)What I say is what I mean.
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Old 08-03-2014, 01:51 PM   #136
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this is how i see the story progress

At some point the wimp bf gets beat up by the bully. Nothing too serious but enough to lay him up in bed for a brief period. When the gf goes to visit her bf, she tells him how sorry she is and sympathies how he must feel. As she is taling to him she flashes her panties, making him hard. Seeing his diminutive hard on she decides to have fun and begins to give him a hand job. All the while she is telling him how big and strong his bully rival is and how easily he was physically dominated. With tears running down his face he can't help but respond and have the biggest cum in his life
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Old 08-03-2014, 03:58 PM   #137
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