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Old 03-22-2014, 04:24 PM   #801
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Old 03-22-2014, 04:26 PM   #802
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Old 03-22-2014, 04:54 PM   #803
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Old 03-22-2014, 07:44 PM   #804
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Old 03-23-2014, 10:56 PM   #805
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Old 03-24-2014, 12:08 AM   #806
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But giving the finger is free, too, and I find it more personal and sincere.
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Old 03-25-2014, 05:34 PM   #807
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Old 03-25-2014, 05:53 PM   #808
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Old 03-25-2014, 06:06 PM   #809
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Winter
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Snow
Blossoms
Fall

Spring
Smiled
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Old 03-25-2014, 06:37 PM   #810
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Old 03-25-2014, 06:55 PM   #811
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Old 03-27-2014, 09:59 AM   #812
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Old 03-27-2014, 10:46 AM   #813
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Melt
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Old 03-27-2014, 03:16 PM   #814
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Hell
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Old 03-27-2014, 03:34 PM   #815
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Old 03-27-2014, 03:43 PM   #816
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Old 03-27-2014, 03:47 PM   #817
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Old 03-27-2014, 03:54 PM   #818
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Old 03-27-2014, 04:34 PM   #819
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Old 03-27-2014, 04:49 PM   #820
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Old 03-29-2014, 05:03 AM   #821
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when walking work
when thinking, work
when talking work!
when resting work!
when sleeping work
while dreaming work
if crushed work
when crying work
while breathing work
when working...?
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Old 03-29-2014, 07:28 AM   #822
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Old 03-29-2014, 11:54 AM   #823
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Old 03-29-2014, 11:55 AM   #824
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