I love writing erotica, but English is only my second language.
I'd like to know if it shows, if it bothers you, and what I could fix.
Here's my stuff: http://www.literotica.com/stories/me...ge=submissions
I also have concerns about pacing (do my stories feel rushed?), so if I could get some feedback on that too it would be great.
Thanks in advance for any replies!