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Old 12-25-2013, 09:08 AM   #326
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Old 12-25-2013, 03:15 PM   #327
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Old 12-31-2013, 12:28 AM   #328
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Old 01-01-2014, 03:55 PM   #330
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Old 01-01-2014, 06:17 PM   #332
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Old 01-01-2014, 06:59 PM   #333
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Old 01-01-2014, 11:46 PM   #334
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If at first you don't succeed....skydiving is not for you ....
If you don't pay your exorcist .... do you get repossessed?
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Old 01-02-2014, 01:35 PM   #340
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But giving the finger is free, too, and I find it more personal and sincere.
If at first you don't succeed....skydiving is not for you ....
If you don't pay your exorcist .... do you get repossessed?
I shall always decide not to decide, unless of course I decide to change my mind.
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Old 01-03-2014, 12:12 PM   #350
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