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Old 11-10-2013, 01:06 PM   #7476
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I feel appendage envy.
with that stick up your butt? shirley nott
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Old 11-10-2013, 01:09 PM   #7477
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What's deep-fat fried and sticky?


A corndog.
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Old 11-10-2013, 01:13 PM   #7478
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What's deep-fat fried and sticky?


A corndog.
and now i'm all sorts of hungry.
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Old 11-10-2013, 01:16 PM   #7479
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and now i'm all sorts of hungry.
You know I'm not good for you, right?

Have to run, thanks for a fun morning!
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Old 11-10-2013, 01:20 PM   #7480
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You know I'm not good for you, right?

Have to run, thanks for a fun morning!
heart attack on a stick, yup.

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Old 11-11-2013, 02:39 AM   #7481
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abandoned
half bottle of
coke,
scraps of wrappers
scattered about,
sleep drought
pickling the brain in
brine,
thinking salty thoughts
in wounded skin

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Old 11-13-2013, 07:01 AM   #7482
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the screws they used
to fasten me together
hell for leather tight
popped right out
the other side,
scattering a smattering
of small debris
in what was left of my
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Old 11-13-2013, 02:49 PM   #7483
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these are so good
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Old 11-13-2013, 03:03 PM   #7484
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sheets
like thin cloud
drift beyond the eyeline
as he finds
a new place
to lay his head

knuckled down
rolling geology
rift and waterfall
seismic tremors
thermal vents
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Old 11-15-2013, 12:49 AM   #7485
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*the trampoline has a safety net
and a warning don't get sued sign*

in this disposable world where
second best is as good as first
I remember pain being a motivator
a teacher,

"wow that hurt
don't do that dumb shit again"
or conversely
"wow need to be better so I can
make that dumb shit look cool*

political correctness and "safety"
gone mad made possible by laws
that defend stupidity,

"only two things in this world are
infinite,
the universe and human stupidity
and I'm not so sure about the universe"
quoted by some random smart dude
at some random interval of time
that still stands the test of duration.

wont be long before you need
goggles, scaffolding, a harness
attached to three secure points,
gloves, a kevlar safety vest,
two spotters, and a back brace
to change a light bulb.
 

Old 11-15-2013, 01:57 PM   #7486
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