Old 10-26-2013, 01:45 PM   #451
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*The gift of poetry*

such an oddity,
this expression of thought
in a mote of sparseness,
a metaphor for sex,
metaphors that vex,
rhymes and dimes,
that run and chime

en-
jambing lines to
make thoughts jump

skip, head to
dip

a trick of phrase to
trace a maze in the mind,
a world still
full of colour

a play on meaning,
interpreted screaming's
visual dreams in ethereal
schemes it seems

your gift of poetry is odd
as is mine to you

now that's some side-step from your usual manner of writing . . . i had to look twice to see if it was one of mine i would have to say it's pretty damned good (yeah, i know that sounds like self-praising, ha!) but that's not to detract from how well you're writing anyway lately.
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Old 10-26-2013, 03:38 PM   #452
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now that's some side-step from your usual manner of writing . . . i had to look twice to see if it was one of mine i would have to save it's pretty damned good (yeah, i know that sounds like self-praising, ha!) but that's not to detract from how well you're writing anyway lately.
self validate I like it
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Old 12-15-2013, 11:53 AM   #453
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Champ you wake up as a voluptuous red head with a wardrobe to match, how does this affect you and yours?
Tess you wake up to having two husbands, to the rest of the world that's normal but it wasn't when you went to sleep and you don't understand. How do you cope?
Tod you wake up to having wings, again a normal thing etc but not to you
Someone must have slipped me a Mickey Finn
washed down with olives and vermouth-damp gin
I thought I was paying for unnamed sin
then looked in the mirror at a redhaired twin

Gone were my mousey, dirty-blonde locks
instead I was sporting a pelt fit for a fox
Not ruby, nor orange nor some shade from a box
this hair was as natural as me not wearing socks

Reluctant I wiggled out of black underwear
and looked down to see if it matched down there
Amazed, I regarded my red pubic hair
and wondered if hubby'd found a genii somewhere

And had wished that he'd married a redheaded girl
who'd rode his virginity with her bright ginger curls
bouncing and flouncing as her pink nipples twirled
while he exploded all over with sticky sperm-pearls

Perhaps I was asleep and was caught in a dream
or reality'd shifted and all was just as it seemed.
I pulled up my pants and went down to my teens
who ignored me as usual while I drank coffee with cream

So I gave up wondering if this was real or fantasy
and decided that a redhead was just who I'd be.
The only way this could be perfect was if he loved me
as much as before, so I'd wait and see

And then he came in to the kitchen and said with a grin
I see you're no worse for consuming all of that gin.
Do you remember us celebrating our lottery win?
So now my beauty, let our new life begin!
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Old 12-15-2013, 12:06 PM   #454
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Someone must have slipped me a Mickey Finn
washed down with olives and vermouth-damp gin
I thought I was paying for unnamed sin
then looked in the mirror at a redhaired twin

Gone were my mousey, dirty-blonde locks
instead I was sporting a pelt fit for a fox
Not ruby, nor orange nor some shade from a box
this hair was as natural as me not wearing socks

Reluctant I wiggled out of black underwear
and looked down to see if it matched down there
Amazed, I regarded my red pubic hair
and wondered if hubby'd found a genii somewhere

And had wished that he'd married a redheaded girl
who'd rode his virginity with her bright ginger curls
bouncing and flouncing as her pink nipples twirled
while he exploded all over with sticky sperm-pearls

Perhaps I was asleep and was caught in a dream
or reality'd shifted and all was just as it seemed.
I pulled up my pants and went down to my teens
who ignored me as usual while I drank coffee with cream

So I gave up wondering if this was real or fantasy
and decided that a redhead was just who I'd be.
The only way this could be perfect was if he loved me
as much as before, so I'd wait and see

And then he came in to the kitchen and said with a grin
I see you're no worse for consuming all of that gin.
Do you remember us celebrating our lottery win?
So now my beauty, let our new life begin!
Red cracker jack!
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Old 12-15-2013, 08:54 PM   #455
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But giving the finger is free, too, and I find it more personal and sincere.
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If you don't pay your exorcist .... do you get repossessed?
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Old 04-10-2014, 11:26 PM   #456
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Crackerjack!!
Pecan Sandies!
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Old 04-10-2014, 11:47 PM   #457
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Pecan Sandies!
Crackerjack was a childrens TV programme that ran from 1955 to 1984 had a lot of comedy sketches but the main things were if Crackerjack was mentioned everyone had to yell it out and also a game called Double or drop. Every time the child answered a question correctly they were given a prize but if the answer was wrong they were given a cabbage. They had to hold onto everything with out dropping them. They were out of the game if they dropped anything or receive a third cabbage.
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They say a smile is a gift which is free to the giver and precious to the recipient.
But giving the finger is free, too, and I find it more personal and sincere.
If at first you don't succeed....skydiving is not for you ....
If you don't pay your exorcist .... do you get repossessed?
I shall always decide not to decide, unless of course I decide to change my mind.
....But I, being poor, have only my dreams, I have spread my dreams under your feet,Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.......
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Old 04-10-2014, 11:51 PM   #458
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Crackerjack was a childrens TV programme that ran from 1955 to 1984 had a lot of comedy sketches but the main things were if Crackerjack was mentioned everyone had to yell it out and also a game called Double or drop. Every time the child answered a question correctly they were given a prize but if the answer was wrong they were given a cabbage. They had to hold onto everything with out dropping them. They were out of the game if they dropped anything or receive a third cabbage.
'84 was a bad year for cabbage, I can understand why the show was cancelled.
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