2-3 paragraphs of added content--help?
Earlier this year, I had someone write a story for me, at first for private use, but he's turned it into a E-book with my own consent. The summary is as follows:
Everyone thinks Stephanie and Ryan are the ideal of marital bliss. Hell, they believe it themselves. But, when Stephanie loses her job, the ensuing cascade of events seems to threaten everything. Ryan is forced to take a second job, and the resultant exhaustion transforms their sex life from a daily event, to weekly, at best. This is another blow to Stephanie's already battered self-esteem; she wonders if Ryan has lost his desire for her.
The reduced frequency of their sex life also serves to focus attention on its quality. Ryan is a gentle and considerate lover, and he always ensures that Stephanie reaches orgasm. But those orgasms never come during intercourse, and Stephanie wonders if the fault is due to Ryan's admittedly small size. That curiosity is only amplified when, at one of her girl's nights out, one of Stephanie's friends points out the sizable bulge in the pants of one of the bar patrons. Stephanie is shocked by her arousal, and more shocked when she finds herself suddenly unable to avoid peeking at the crotch of every man she meets.
As it happens, Ben has returned to his hometown. He's a remarkably successful Wall Street financier. But, all his conquests, both in the canyons of financial power and in the bedrooms of myriad beautiful women have left him feeling empty. He needs something else, and when he meets Stephanie and Ryan, he believes he's found the solution.
Stephanie's new habit and her dissatisfaction in the bedroom have not go unnoticed by Ryan. He's always wanted nothing more than her happiness. But, when he suggests to Stephanie that their new friend Ben may hold the answer to their problems, she's confused. He can't possibly mean that, can he?
Warning: Contains graphic depictions of sexual acts between consenting adults, including an extra-marital encounter between a wife and a spectacularly endowed friend.
Anyways, the story was fantastic, more than I expected it to be.
The one catch? The build up and foreplay were all good, very detailed, and salacious. When it came to the actual coupling, however, it focused all on the penetration and the actual sex went by in like a paragraph, which was kind of a huge letdown.
So comes my unusual request. I still my own personal copy of the story, which is a little bit different than the finalized one out there. I'm asking if anyone is willing to write out 2-3 quick paragraphs to expand just on that one part of the story, the dick-in-pussy sex itself.