Go Back   Literotica Discussion Board > Main Literotica Forums > Poetry Feedback & Discussion

Reply
 
Thread Tools

Old 10-18-2013, 03:20 PM   #51
butters
Harry's Girl
 
butters's Avatar
 
butters is offline
Join Date: Jul 2009
Location: London UK
Posts: 48,739
swallow my heart
it lurches, erratically
run! run for cover!
don't stumble between those blue steel rails
heroes, ghosts
there's no forever
the bridge is falling! falling!
train's hot and mournsome breath
seeks some newer way
on my neck
break sweat
alarm bells ring
eyes break on day
__________________
poetry submissions


What strange machinery lies between her ears
HarryHill


'tender hearted...
  Reply With Quote

Old 10-18-2013, 04:17 PM   #52
UnderYourSpell
Gerund Whore
 
UnderYourSpell's Avatar
 
UnderYourSpell is offline
Join Date: May 2007
Location: Somewhere over the rainbow
Posts: 12,333
Quote:
Originally Posted by butters View Post
swallow my heart
it lurches, erratically
run! run for cover!
don't stumble between those blue steel rails
heroes, ghosts
there's no forever
the bridge is falling! falling!
train's hot and mournsome breath
seeks some newer way
on my neck
break sweat
alarm bells ring
eyes break on day
I get dreams like that!
__________________

Blessed are the cracked for it is they that let in the light
They say a smile is a gift which is free to the giver and precious to the recipient.
But giving the finger is free, too, and I find it more personal and sincere.
If at first you don't succeed....skydiving is not for you ....
If you don't pay your exorcist .... do you get repossessed?
I shall always decide not to decide, unless of course I decide to change my mind.
....But I, being poor, have only my dreams, I have spread my dreams under your feet,Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.......
Nil Caborundum illigitimi
Sestina slut
Annie submits
  Reply With Quote

Old 10-18-2013, 04:42 PM   #53
butters
Harry's Girl
 
butters's Avatar
 
butters is offline
Join Date: Jul 2009
Location: London UK
Posts: 48,739
Quote:
Originally Posted by UnderYourSpell View Post
I get dreams like that!
bloody hell, i don't envy you them
__________________
poetry submissions


What strange machinery lies between her ears
HarryHill


'tender hearted...
  Reply With Quote

Old 10-18-2013, 07:27 PM   #54
Angeline
Poet Chick
 
Angeline's Avatar
 
Angeline is offline
Join Date: Mar 2002
Location: Birdnest
Posts: 23,944
This is quite a batch of poems. All effective in communicating urgency though each takes a different approach.

__________________
Talk

Poems
  Reply With Quote

Old 10-20-2013, 06:04 AM   #55
todski28
Literotica Guru
 
todski28 is offline
Join Date: Aug 2012
Posts: 814
Zack, yearning
xenoglossia wanton voice
urges, take succoured release,
quivering pride obtained,
need moist liquid kisses,
jousted inner heat
garners flaming embers,

drinking carnality before
abstinence

Last edited by todski28 : 10-21-2013 at 04:01 AM.
  Reply With Quote
Reply


Thread Tools

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



All times are GMT -4. The time now is 03:26 PM.

Copyright 1998-2013 Literotica Online. Literotica is a registered trademark.