Old 06-17-2013, 12:15 PM   #1
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Girl in the blue dress

I would firstly like to say I hope this offends nobody or upsets, and it has one profanity in it.

The girl in the blue dress
Her life such a mess
She spends her time crying and numbing the pain
Because nobody ever remembers her name
They use her for pleasure and laugh in her face
Not giving a fuck that she's in a dark place
The drugs and the sex have weighed down her soul
It's a matter of time till she loses control
As the strain on her heart
Becomes too much to carry, she goes out in the dark
With revenge in her thoughts
To punish the men who let her be bought
She offers them gifts, to which they adore
Not knowing they've more than they bargained for
She smiles with resent as she sends a disease
That will rot to the core and cut them to knees
The girl in the blue dress starts to wither away
With her dying body pleased that she had it her way
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Old 06-17-2013, 09:20 PM   #2
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I would firstly like to say I hope this offends nobody or upsets, and it has one profanity in it.

The girl in the blue dress
Her life such a mess
She spends her time crying and numbing the pain
Because nobody ever remembers her name
They use her for pleasure and laugh in her face
Not giving a fuck that she's in a dark place
The drugs and the sex have weighed down her soul
It's a matter of time till she loses control
As the strain on her heart
Becomes too much to carry, she goes out in the dark
With revenge in her thoughts
To punish the men who let her be bought
She offers them gifts, to which they adore
Not knowing they've more than they bargained for
She smiles with resent as she sends a disease
That will rot to the core and cut them to knees
The girl in the blue dress starts to wither away
With her dying body pleased that she had it her way


At first I would have said been there done that it relates to me for sure, but not the revenge part never had the guts to go through with it!!!
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Old 06-25-2013, 08:42 PM   #3
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Girl in a Blue Dress

eating a banana—cliché,
of course, though she’s really
taking it, god, way deep before
biting off a hunk.
The peel hangs limp,
ineffectual, about her fingers.
Done, she’ll throw it away.
Some clown will land on his bum.

Monet would paint the scene
with a thick curve of cadmium yellow,
a thin wash of cobalt blue.

The clown would be a lily,
serenely white in hue.
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Old 06-26-2013, 01:37 AM   #4
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Girl in a Blue Dress

eating a banana—cliché,
of course, though she’s really
taking it, god, way deep before
biting off a hunk.
The peel hangs limp,
ineffectual, about her fingers.
Done, she’ll throw it away.
Some clown will land on his bum.

Monet would paint the scene
with a thick curve of cadmium yellow,
a thin wash of cobalt blue.

The clown would be a lily,
serenely white in hue.
never liked bananas but after that I would be willing to try to do the same thing
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Old 07-04-2013, 02:53 PM   #5
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I would firstly like to say I hope this offends nobody or upsets, and it has one profanity in it.

The girl in the blue dress
Her life such a mess
She spends her time crying and numbing the pain
Because nobody ever remembers her name
They use her for pleasure and laugh in her face
Not giving a fuck that she's in a dark place
it upsets me,
rhyming coups always do
is there a reason for? my guess, song lyrics are the main inspiration. On the good side, no forced poetics.
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Old 07-04-2013, 02:56 PM   #6
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Monet would paint the scene
with a thick curve of cadmium yellow,
a thin wash of cobalt blue.

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apparently you missed the lecture I got
about a tube of cerulean blue
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Old 07-04-2013, 05:35 PM   #7
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twelveoone: apparently you missed the lecture I got
about a tube of cerulean blue
Today 12:53 PM


.......I'm glad you missed when I used Thalo in a poem
good to see you.
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