Cheating husband erotic horror

[loquere]

Jill catches her husband Bob cheating. She finds out he has a secret family. She automatically falls out of love with him and sets about killing him, so she keep the kids, and to a lesser degree the money and the house.

-Without alerting him to her intent, she devices a plan spanning three years. She starts making him fattier foods laced with weight gain ingredients. Over the 3 years he increases his 210 pounds to 340.

-One night during sex Jill rides him into a sweating mess. He has a massive heart attack. She does not attempt to help him as she sits atop him watching the life ooze from his body.

[LadyVer]

Well, I guess that's one way to get back at a cheating spouse. I think.it would be great to make a comedic horror story out of it. It takes her 3 years so I could see where comedy could be involved. One night, she serves him spaghetti with meatballs. The meatballs are canned dogfood, sprinked with parsley, sage, rosemary, and thyme--with a dash of arsenic. Add his favorite wine to distract him. I remember a similar scene from The Prince of Tides--just the dogfood.

[loquere]

Originally Posted by LadyVer

Well, I guess that's one way to get back at a cheating spouse. I think.it would be great to make a comedic horror story out of it. It takes her 3 years so I could see where comedy could be involved. One night, she serves him spaghetti with meatballs. The meatballs are canned dogfood, sprinked with parsley, sage, rosemary, and thyme--with a dash of arsenic. Add his favorite wine to distract him. I remember a similar scene from The Prince of Tides--just the dogfood.

Yeah, I'm not a comedic person, but then again I'm not writing it. I was thinking more that she worked in a lap at that she was mixing chemicals. I mean he can't wake up a weak later and be a giant.

[LadyVer]

Originally Posted by loquere

Yeah, I'm not a comedic person, but then again I'm not writing it. I was thinking more that she worked in a lap at that she was mixing chemicals. I mean he can't wake up a weak later and be a giant.

Well, some of your stories had a hint of comedy. I thought she didn't want him waking up at all.

[loquere]

Originally Posted by LadyVer

Well, some of your stories had a hint of comedy. I thought she didn't want him waking up at all.

She want him dead

[LadyVer]

Originally Posted by loquere

She want him dead

No she doesn't. She just wants payback. She wouldn't let him within five feet of her either.

[loquere]

Originally Posted by LadyVer

No she doesn't. She just wants payback. She wouldn't let him within five feet of her either.

You seem to know the character well. Put pen to paper, finger to type-writer or eyes to a blank page.

[jasper3738]

And in a weird teisted fate as the heart attack is happening he realizes he is going to die
He musters all he can and fills his wife with seed and she becomes pregnant

[LadyVer]

Originally Posted by loquere

You seem to know the character well. Put pen to paper, finger to type-writer or eyes to a blank page.

You are the writer. I am just the humble--but non-Stepford--editor.

[MatthewVett]

I'm not sure being fed and fucked by your wife while having an affair on the side is as horrifying as you make it out to be.

[LadyVer]

Originally Posted by MatthewVett

I'm not sure being fed and fucked by your wife while having an affair on the side is as horrifying as you make it out to be.

That's where the dogfood and arsenic come in.

[Monazwx]

His weight increase maybe more terrifying for her than him if she has to deal with it for 3 years. Besides, wouldn't he be going to the doctors within that span of time to figure out what's wrong?