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Old 04-04-2013, 04:46 PM   #1
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Feedback on Spanking Story

Hi, this is a story of a couple of Indian housemaids spanking their employer's adult son, who is a submissive. I am looking for review/feedback of Chapter 4, as I am now writing Chapter 5 and 6 and needed some story ideas.

Link: www.literotica.com /s/ indian-maid-spanks-me-ch-04

If the above links don't work, my author name is "spankedboy" and story is titled "Indian Maid Spanks Me Ch. 04".

Thanks,

Tarek
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Old 04-05-2013, 08:44 AM   #2
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Your link doesn't work. It just directs us to the site's home page. Can you post a proper link?
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Old 04-05-2013, 09:40 AM   #3
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Your link doesn't work. It just directs us to the site's home page. Can you post a proper link?
Hi, the forum is garbling the links. I have linked to my stories in my signature though.
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I write about strong Indian women and their cuckolded husbands and spanked males.

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