Great story

[loquere]

http://www.literotica.com/s/the-kind-stranger

This story is a great incest story, by VincentC. It only received a 4.49. Vincent C started on Lit in 2004 but seemed to have only written this 1 story in 2011. I know how hard it is to write and I thought the story was more deserving, of a higher vote.

Please read it and vote, I loved this story and was shocked to see how low it was rated. Read and vote.

[Stella_Omega]

Post it to the fetish forum, is my suggestion.

[loquere]

Originally Posted by Stella_Omega

Post it to the fetish forum, is my suggestion.

I think it's fine here for authors to see it. it' isn't my story. I've done my part.

[lovecraft68]

Originally Posted by loquere

I think it's fine here for authors to see it. it' isn't my story. I've done my part.

But if you want to do it better go stick it in the "incest is best" thread or as Stella noted, have this thread in the fetish forum.

Incest does not go over huge here. Its not considered "real writing" by some.

But that person is just jealous of writers who get more than 4k views so I suppose they shouldn't matter.

[sr71plt]

Officially, I think, this is best posted in the "Story Feedback" forum, but I like to see read recommendation on stories like this, so it doesn't bother me to see it here.

[Stella_Omega]

I'm suggesting posting it there because there are a lot of fetish fanciers there, and you want a lot of readers.

[lovecraft68]

Originally Posted by Stella_Omega

I'm suggesting posting it there because there are a lot of fetish fanciers there, and you want a lot of readers.

Plus what you have here is mostly authors. Over there you got a ton of readers and that's who is going to be more interested in this story.

I did give it a look and thought it was okay not as good as the OP seemed to think it was, but everyone's taste is different.

[loquere]

Originally Posted by lovecraft68

Plus what you have here is mostly authors. Over there you got a ton of readers and that's who is going to be more interested in this story.

I did give it a look and thought it was okay not as good as the OP seemed to think it was, but everyone's taste is different.

I loved the concept. I like unexpected plots. It makes me feel like the story is atleast trying, i'm am not fond of lazy stories. I will put it in the fetish forum.

I read this piece of crap story a while back that was close to a 5.00. it was about a guy crushing a grass hoper that was scaring his hot female neighbour. The girl was so scared of the grass hopper she thanks him by fucking him. End of story. THE FUCK WAS THAT?

[lovecraft68]

Originally Posted by loquere

I loved the concept. I like unexpected plots. It makes me feel like the story is atleast trying, i'm am not fond of lazy stories. I will put it in the fetish forum.

I read this piece of crap story a while back that was close to a 5.00. it was about a guy crushing a grass hoper that was scaring his hot female neighbour. The girl was so scared of the grass hopper she thanks him by fucking him. End of story. THE FUCK WAS THAT?

That's called stroke and it has appeal here to some of the readership. Everything here is subjective, your crap is my favorite story and the other way around as well.

[kbate]

It was an 'ok' story, nothing overly hot, nothing astounding. The writing was at best - average.

Too much back-story dropped for no good reason. The "not quite surprise" ending was painfully obvious from the phrase 'cute girl'.

Anyway. . . Everyone has their own tastes.

[datedsoul]

This is also one of those stories where the category itself ruins the surprise. I'm sure the author got dinged for the editing as well. Plenty of missing spaces. It's very dry in some spots as well.

And bad speech punctuation.

This is one that, had it not come recommended, I would have backed away after just a few paragraphs.

[loquere]

Originally Posted by datedsoul

This is also one of those stories where the category itself ruins the surprise. I'm sure the author got dinged for the editing as well. Plenty of missing spaces. It's very dry in some spots as well.

And bad speech punctuation.

This is one that, had it not come recommended, I would have backed away after just a few paragraphs.

Well I guess I lost my credibility. Now I'm starting to second guess all my abilities, as a porn writer.
Because I love his concept and I think it better than mine. It actually inspired me to write my first indirect incest/erotic coupling story.

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

I read it and liked the writing tho the story isnt my usual fare. You like what you like, its why you checkout sites and magazines before you submit. Pizza prolly dont thrill those who want roast beef.

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

Originally Posted by loquere

Well I guess I lost my credibility. Now I'm starting to second guess all my abilities, as a porn writer.
Because I love his concept and I think it better than mine. It actually inspired me to write my first indirect incest/erotic coupling story.

Dont let our resident assholes discourage you. If something appeals to you go for it.

[lovecraft68]

For those who don't like it that of course is your opinion and you are entitled to it.

But I get a kick out of people who really pick these stories apart.

This is a free site where most write for fun. You want petfect grammar and amazing stories then go actually pay for something.

[loquere]

Originally Posted by lovecraft68

For those who don't like it that of course is your opinion and you are entitled to it.

But I get a kick out of people who really pick these stories apart.

This is a free site where most write for fun. You want petfect grammar and amazing stories then go actually pay for something.

Thank you, I feel that same way and the editing process four one story is starting to take weeks. Now that all my stories are starting to be around 1000 word,

I have a story right now that's over ten thousand words and honest to God, I'm afraid the multiple story-lines is going to push it to around twenty thousand. I wrote the shoot out scene last night and boy was it good but it's so long. It's going to be a bitch to edit.