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Old 02-07-2013, 05:14 PM   #151
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Milked by throat and invisible hand.

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Widow deepthroat swallows with expert ease
Divine sweet salt milk honey seed.

Tee hee hee, enough adjectives for an empurpled pontiff!
Well ... I was hoping we might get round to the golden horns eventually, perhaps the Widow better come (ho ho) back for them after unimagined unseen delights have been invisibly somehow sampled. Meanwhile, poor old Betty's still squashed in her sandwich.
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Old 02-08-2013, 03:17 AM   #152
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Widow deepthroat swallows with expert ease
Divine sweet salt milk honey seed.

Tee hee hee, enough adjectives for an empurpled pontiff!
Well ... I was hoping we might get round to the golden horns eventually, perhaps the Widow better come (ho ho) back for them after unimagined unseen delights have been invisibly somehow sampled. Meanwhile, poor old Betty's still squashed in her sandwich.
Lance withdrawn, dripping, from Widow's mouth...

... imbued with divine vigour, still hard.

Godhand grasps invisible wrist. "Hello, Storm-lady..."
Now, please understand, I'm only doing this as part of Neko's PornPanacea (TM) therapy. Such altruism...
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Lance withdrawn, dripping, from Widow's mouth...


Now, please understand, I'm only doing this as part of Neko's PornPanacea (TM) therapy. Such altruism...
Lounging on leathers, naked Black Widow
Looks round, glint in lustful eye ...

Ohhh, Loverboy. You are so goooo-oood. <snoffle>.
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Lounging on leathers, naked Black Widow
Looks round, glint in lustful eye ...

Ohhh, Loverboy. You are so goooo-oood. <snoffle>.
Cap's still beating his meat nearby...

Sorry, thought we needed a counterblaste to all the purpura...
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Cap's still beating his meat nearby...

Sorry, thought we needed a counterblaste to all the purpura...
Captured in Wonder Woman's truth lasso

Meanwhile, languishing back on page 2:

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Gamma-induced girth glides into scarlet...
Love muscles
[that was my bit before the Captain, Invisible Sue, the perfidious Black Widow and Loki got in on the act]

While giant green mushroom ...

Shall we go for some salsa verde instead of the purpura?
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Captured in Wonder Woman's truth lasso

Meanwhile, languishing back on page 2:


Love muscles
[that was my bit before the Captain, Invisible Sue, the perfidious Black Widow and Loki got in on the act]

While giant green mushroom ...

Shall we go for some salsa verde instead of the purpura?
... plumbs crimson depths as yet uncharted.

Salsa? But I have two left feet...

Jesus, woman... You're insatiable!
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Captured in Wonder Woman's truth lasso

Meanwhile, languishing back on page 2:

"Pump!" demands Amazon
tight'ning lasso 'round shaft..


Love muscles
[that was my bit before the Captain, Invisible Sue, the perfidious Black Widow and Loki got in on the act]

While giant green mushroom ...

Shall we go for some salsa verde instead of the purpura?
spongiosum full,
awaits spores eruption.

(sorry, been having connectio problems)
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... plumbs crimson depths as yet uncharted.

Salsa? But I have two left feet...

Jesus, woman... You're insatiable!
Betty trembles with seismic scarlet seizure

Well, we could make it a quickie if you're busy
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"Pump!" demands Amazon
tight'ning lasso 'round shaft..

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spongiosum full,
awaits spores eruption.

(sorry, been having connectio problems)
Part of six-word-sentence lost in blizzard?

Amazon's powerful wrists strain against bracelets
Demanding true seed from national hero
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Betty trembles with seismic scarlet seizure

Well, we could make it a quickie if you're busy
Gargantuan green hands grasp scarlet buttocks,

barely-controlled rage stokes passion's fires.

Sorry, Naoko, did you think I was complaining? Just making an observation...
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Gargantuan green hands grasp scarlet buttocks,

barely-controlled rage stokes passion's fires.

Sorry, Naoko, did you think I was complaining? Just making an observation...
Military daughter gasps wide-eyed, "Why, Bruce,
you ARE cross to see me."

Fab! Matching profile pics! Neko's got hers up too, see? That blur by the cat. And is that Batman you have waiting in the wings?
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you ARE cross to see me."

Fab! Matching profile pics! Neko's got hers up too, see? That blur by the cat. And is that Batman you have waiting in the wings?
Hulk lifts Betty, light as paper...

Settles scarlet haunches over his face...

Rough emerald tongue, parting crimson curtains.

Blur?

Batman's non-U (or at least non-Marvel...), but I feel a certakn affinity to the battered Daek Knight right now...
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Hulk lifts Betty, light as paper...

Settles scarlet haunches over his face...

Rough emerald tongue, parting crimson curtains.

Blur?

Batman's non-U (or at least non-Marvel...), but I feel a certakn affinity to the battered Daek Knight right now...
Iron Man slinks off, seeking Sue,
Bested at last by non-corny green giant.

Betty flutters like an origami maiden,
pleasurably pleated by gargantuan green caresses.

You can come down and wreak vengeance on the evil line managers who are going to make me talk about References and how to stick one in the appropriate place, when Scotland are playing Italy at home
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Iron Man slinks off, seeking Sue,
Bested at last by non-corny green giant.

Betty flutters like an origami maiden,
pleasurably pleated by gargantuan green caresses.

You can come down and wreak vengeance on the evil line managers who are going to make me talk about References and how to stick one in the appropriate place, when Scotland are playing Italy at home
Feeling refreshed, Invisible Woman spots Ironman.
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Dejected, Iron Man seeks unseen solace.

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Welcome back, Neko! Glad to see the PornPanacea's working its magic...
It a magic elixir-- that and the chat.

Using invisibility, Sue's launches her seduction.
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It a magic elixir-- that and the chat.

Using invisibility, Sue's launches her seduction.
Sensors registering body heat. No visuals...

Good to hear, Mrs Richards.
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Sensors registering body heat. No visuals...

Good to hear, Mrs Richards.
Psionic blasts continue distracting Iron Man. . .
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Psionic blasts continue distracting Iron Man. . .
Thermal imaging reveals voluptuous form. Wow.
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Launching invisible field to dissolve suit...

(Sue snickers and smiles in anticipation..)
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(Sue snickers and smiles in anticipation..)
Iron Man suddenly stripped "Stark" naked...

<braces himself...>
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Tongue thick as a man's member

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Tongue thick as a man's member

plumbs scarlet depths with feverish gusto.
Red thighs clench about green cheeks
Ecstatic eruptions quiver in carmine deeps

OMG! You must go away and cum back more often! Er, come back. Excuse me while I go and roll on the floor laughing in front of my freezer with the door wide open!
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OMG! You must go away and cum back more often! Er, come back. Excuse me while I go and roll on the floor laughing in front of my freezer with the door wide open!
Emerald hands spread firm red cheeks...

... monstrous tongue strays to puckered bud.

Well, they say absence makes the... thingy grow... something...

My memories getting worse, y'know. Don't forget the ice cubes...
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