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Old 02-01-2013, 06:27 AM   #51
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... marble-like godflesh. Loki's lance lunges...
, luscious lips are licked and kissed.
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Longing for more than one hand.
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Tossing head in to magical kiss
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Old 02-01-2013, 01:23 PM   #61
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"Front zipper. My favourite..." Loki smirks.
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"Front zipper. My favourite..." Loki smirks.
"Mind the belt," she bats eyelashes.
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Old 02-02-2013, 03:49 AM   #63
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"Mind the belt," she bats eyelashes.
Zip slides down. Alabaster flesh revealed...
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Old 02-02-2013, 04:11 AM   #64
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Lissome blonde heard Captain America's primed!
Called America's Finest with good reason...

Have you picked a character, btw? I can think of several lissom Marvel character's, but you might have a favourite of your own...
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Have you picked a character, btw? I can think of several lissom Marvel character's, but you might have a favourite of your own...
Nope. Lissome blonde needs some suggestions.
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Nope. Lissome blonde needs some suggestions.
Cap gasps, "Sue Storm..." Pleasant throb...
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Old 02-02-2013, 05:24 AM   #68
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Clearly, you can see my desire. . .

(Be prepared for a lot of puns on invisibility..)
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Black leather lightly shrugged off shoulders.

My word, Steve, you've got your hands full! And I might have to get busy soon too! This thread is littered with my ex's: Deadpool, Captain America .... Iron Man ought to be occupied just now (the twotiming so and so). And Krsna lurking around somewhere no doubt (Tio was that a bit of MM coming up?). Phew, excuse me while I stand in front of the freezer wearing ... never mind what I might not be wearing Hooray Neko has come out to play! although I'm a bit surprised you didn't pick Catwoman .
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Clearly, you can see my desire. . .

(Be prepared for a lot of puns on invisibility..)
"That suit leaves little to imagination..."

Double entendres? Moi? Perish the thought...
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My word, Steve, you've got your hands full! And I might have to get busy soon too! This thread is littered with my ex's: Deadpool, Captain America .... Iron Man ought to be occupied just now (the twotiming so and so). And Krsna lurking around somewhere no doubt (Tio was that a bit of MM coming up?). Phew, excuse me while I stand in front of the freezer wearing ... never mind what I might not be wearing Hooray Neko has come out to play! although I'm a bit surprised you didn't pick Catwoman .
Cruel godfingers twist straining pink nipples.
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Old 02-02-2013, 05:53 AM   #73
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Thin-lipped kisses to smother snarls.

I'm sure you'll manage, Naoko. You strike me as a woman who can juggle several balls at once...

Neko was specifically looking for a "lissome blonde." After a brief geek consultancy session, she thankfully settled on the Invisible Woman. This makes me happy, as I spent many a happy teenage hour dreaming up how she could use her force field powers to pleasure us both.

I didn't get out much then, either...
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I'm sure you'll manage, Naoko. You strike me as a woman who can juggle several balls at once...

Neko was specifically looking for a "lissome blonde." After a brief geek consultancy session, she thankfully settled on the Invisible Woman. This makes me happy, as I spent many a happy teenage hour dreaming up how she could use her force field powers to pleasure us both.

I didn't get out much then, either...
Tongue darting in divine hot mouth

Oh, we MILFs are expert multi-taskers y'know
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Oh, we MILFs are expert multi-taskers y'know
Enquiring godfingers slip inside leather suit...

We managers have our moments, too...
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