Then take a gander at my first LW submission here
. And skip right to the comments. Feel free to post your actual opinion of the story, but I know it's crap. It was written off the cuff and to see if I could get the comments everyone seems so bitchy about. It worked as planned, though I am surprised to have gotten so many good comments as to why the reader didn't like the story. One was particularly detailed...
Stirring up the trolls is quite fun, so now I'll be off writing a more serious LW story. One that I actually put a bit more care into and get edited before submitting.
Really, you don't have to read it. The comments are fucking hilarious, though.