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Old 01-20-2013, 08:02 PM   #1
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Cool Killed a rapist

So a character kills an attempted rapist in my upcoming story? Not a problem for Lit submission right?

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Old 01-20-2013, 08:04 PM   #2
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Likely not. I'd just be wary of adding too many gory details, is all.
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Old 01-20-2013, 08:07 PM   #3
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Likely not. I'd just be wary of adding too many gory details, is all.
Just a rock and some brain. What the fucker tried to do was a lot more gory. I've seen deaths in stories here erotic horror really, mostly succbus.
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Old 01-20-2013, 08:09 PM   #4
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The brain would be gore. I've killed off characters on Lit. before, but I haven't been graphic about doing it (other than the ones vampires have fucked to death. They died smiling, which I guess was the saving grace as far as Lit. was concerned).
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Old 01-20-2013, 08:13 PM   #5
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I think you can get away with some gore and a lot of violence. I had a fight scene that had a finger bitten off and an eye gouged out.

I know you can;t have the death occur during any type of sex or its snuff.

You should be fine, if nothing else just let it fly and see if they kick it back or not.
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Old 01-20-2013, 08:15 PM   #6
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I think you can get away with some gore and a lot of violence. I had a fight scene that had a finger bitten off and an eye gouged out.

I know you can;t have the death occur during any type of sex or its snuff.

You should be fine, if nothing else just let it fly and see if they kick it back or not.
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Old 01-20-2013, 08:17 PM   #7
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No one batted an eye when the protagonist of my first chapter had his brain fried while going at it. But I got flagged for possible underage although there was no indication for it. Make of it what you will *shrug*
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Old 01-20-2013, 08:25 PM   #8
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I just had to write a story where Michael Jackson gets jacked up.
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Old 01-20-2013, 08:28 PM   #9
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I just had to write a story where Michael Jackson gets jacked up.
Why is it that folks give only a small slice of the question when asking for guidance help? This particular scenario is probably going to have a rough time passing here. There's so much more going on than what you first stated was the case.
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Old 01-20-2013, 08:43 PM   #10
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Michael jackson ain't in the story. It's not a celeb story.

In all actuality the description is just a recuer bashing the rapists head in rage. Then the victim shooting the rapist long after he's dead. The story is a romantic interacial mafia story.
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Old 01-20-2013, 08:44 PM   #11
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some something controversial

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Old 01-20-2013, 09:10 PM   #12
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I wrote in a story where a murderer is shot in the face four times at close range with a 9mm pistol and the back of his head explodes. No one said boo about that.
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So I had a story where a woman tells how she was gang raped at 14.

4 years later on her 18th birthday her mother who is a witch and bringing her officially into her coven has kidnapped the 4 guys who did it.

I describe how as they're hanging upside down, she one at a time slits them from their anus to to their throat then crosses the t and slits their throats.

as she's killing them she is aroused and her mother is reaching between her legs and gets her off.

Story posted was on site for a few months then somebody reported it.

The reason they booted it?

underage. I mentioned she was 14 when she was raped.

That is how idiotic they are with the underage rule everything else is totally fine.
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Michael jackson ain't in the story. It's not a celeb story.
Well, you certainly know how to confuse a reader.
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Old 01-20-2013, 11:17 PM   #15
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Well, you certainly know how to confuseMy dream was ta reader.
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My dream job has always to be in house counsel for central inteligence.
I'd work on my spelling then, If I were you.
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Old 01-20-2013, 11:38 PM   #17
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I'd work on my spelling then, If I were you.
Since this is not China I'm free to write free from the constraints of punctuation death squads.

Sr71 u a communist?
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Old 01-20-2013, 11:39 PM   #18
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It sure as hell dosen't sound like you love America.
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Old 01-20-2013, 11:40 PM   #19
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Old 01-20-2013, 11:46 PM   #20
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You constantly support pedophiles, a group who commit the gravest act of evil America faces today. In truth and reflection it's an act only surpassed by terrorism. I want to purge them, you want to legitimaze them. Stop attacking me and stop attacking America SR71.

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Old 01-20-2013, 11:57 PM   #21
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Sure you're not an alt for asylumseeker?

Not making a lick of sense.
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Old 01-21-2013, 12:09 AM   #22
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This thread took an unexpected turn.

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Old 01-21-2013, 01:11 AM   #23
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Sure you're not an alt for asylumseeker?

Not making a lick of sense.
This is me saying the following. You don't respect free speech and you don't care about the continued safety of America's young. I read a post of yours the other day, about loopholes for children in stories. Which makes me believe that you're a secret pedophile.
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Since this is not China I'm free to write free from the constraints of punctuation death squads.

Sr71 u a communist?
You clearly need a visit from the spelling death squads, though.
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Old 01-21-2013, 01:43 AM   #25
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This is me saying the following. You don't respect free speech and you don't care about the continued safety of America's young. I read a post of yours the other day, about loopholes for children in stories. Which makes me believe that you're a secret pedophile.
Please cite that post. Because, frankly, you are off your rocker.
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