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Old 01-19-2013, 07:57 PM   #26
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I have to admit: I've got a weakness for Hannibal Lecter/Joker (Heath Ledger version)-esque dialogues, where the character tells another person why they've failed as a human being. I know most high-schoolers aren't as eloquent as they are on TV shows, but perhaps at one point, he does this to the girl's idiot friends (specifically, the so-called "Alpha Bitch").

Basically, as he realizes that the love interest isn't playing around, naturally, the idiot brigade is completely unconvinced that her feelings are real. After all, there's NO WAY IN HELL this could be real. So he ends up verbally shutting them down with a "Reason You Suck" speech, leaving them emotionally shocked.

Unoriginal scene? Yes. Tears? Perhaps. Driven to suicide? Maybe not that far.

(NOTE: I know doing something like this is petty and shallow, but as a geek, I feel it's justified).
I undertood none of this.
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Old 01-20-2013, 01:40 PM   #27
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I undertood none of this.
I'm glad to know I wasn't the only one left scratching his head after that response. lol
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Old 03-18-2014, 09:09 AM   #28
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Fuck, I must be getting old.

My take:
the boy and girl are friendly, but not even really friends. They hang out some at the nursing home, taking his grandfather and her grandmother to the movies, etc.

The grandparents both feel that the two kids should get together and maybe marry.

Instead, it's the boy that ends up the best man, her the bridesmaid, to their grandparents' wedding.

Jenny
I've been going through my old ideas looking for something I could combine with a current idea. I came across this while doing that, I must have missed it the first time. This is sweet.
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