Old 01-19-2013, 09:00 AM   #1
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Hello, I am looking for an editor to assist me with my first story submission.
It is a reasonably short story about a submissive meeting her online Dom in RL for the first time. It has been rejected on punctuation grounds, so whoever takes it on should be aware that would be the major element.

I hope that I can spark an interest, please drop me a line if you are interested in helping.

Many thanks
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Old 01-19-2013, 11:42 PM   #2
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Old 01-20-2013, 06:31 AM   #3
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Old 01-20-2013, 07:36 AM   #4
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It is relatively light bondage, the subject is new to the lifestyle. The onus is very much on control and obedience. There is one scene of flogging, that is about as hardcore as it gets
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Old 01-24-2013, 04:20 AM   #5
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Hello - I'm a relative newcomer to this type of writing but I would be very happy to help out, drop me a PM if you like.
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Old 01-24-2013, 04:50 AM   #6
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I've helped a few writers, and had a couple of pieces of my own accepted (reminds me to start writing again), so if you still need help, PM it to me and I'll reply with the edits.
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Old 01-24-2013, 02:40 PM   #7
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Thank you for your kind offers, I have spoken with an editor and hopefully will have a completed piece of work to submit very soon!
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