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Old 01-11-2013, 12:05 AM   #1
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My more beautiful than sun rose, Dath robbed

My more beautiful than sun rose, Dath robbed



Rose,s white sweet, yet green lotus lips on singing,

I heartbroken crying aloud.Ah!why sudden jumped Out

Of mouth of snake night,Killed air,hope,time,Cosmos.

I must huged my lover-To Be,i killed my Love Rival-Not

To Be.ever Defying Death,i for my Baby alive.red pain

My chest seemed to burst.let me calm!is illusion? i my

Rose kissing sweet.why,my joy crying?i laughing,used my

Hand, covering my mouth,ah!is i-lotus,s pain who

Didst waken from Life of my life-small green leaf-baby,

S dream Pring?do not cry,joy,come,mama hug.got your lip

Received honey sea,mama kissed you? ay!you used thee

Nod so answer smiling.you are my air,hope,time-baby,

Bigest one.car killed your papa,when i unable endures my

pain, i wanted to commit suicide,but,my own MAMA-LOVE,

Makes me be loving my life heartily. your burning this

Thousand ice-mountain.In world,if you Don't exist,love

Culture, water,soil,beauty becomes East fish-i,sall

Die,for flower bird grass,s sigh lonely,will

Blow this the East fish-i, to Death,s eat-desk up.that

Please listen to poetry,you are a green dew,joy singing

Dances on red face of july.my inner secrets pregnant with

You from sky birth to now, flys silver light twinkles Song,

By frogs choir,from the dark river bank. frogs singing

Thee-dew,to nil-body,s people.tis

It seems that lotus,s chest would break with pain,Death







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Durch Chinesische Dichter fengwenshu


By Chinese poet fengwenshu,



[ Shiratori]

Now, like black ice-mountain
Gap, has transmitted the
Ancient spirit sigh, In the gap of the
Universe,Came the disturbing people mood, cold female singing
Voice,this ,seems to be cut off the lifeline of Destiny goddess singing.

Sound,his song predicted what, who lifeline,this destiny goddess is about to be cut off.
My eyes,is searching in the boundless dark night Universe,
From the East of the Universe, to the
West, the South to the North, In the entire Universe,
My vision, able to see the Place,

All, searched ,found nothing suspicious place .
Just when i close my eyes, to rest my eyes, suddenly, entire Universe,
Suddenly, is a loud big roaring red light
Lit up. Illuminated the Universe,
This loud roaring red light,


Illuminated,this loud big roaring red light,
From that in the body of a black wave
Of ,flew out,i must have to
Defeat this black waves,kill the black wave,
Never allow the black waves,

Do
My grave.
The original, it is from that i know
That shiratori mouth,
Flying out of the red light.

This
Shiratori, in the body of the black wave,saw this,
I had known suddenly that Destiny goddess singing,purpose
If this hakucho,
Not quickly escape from the body of this


Black wave,
This
Shiratori will die. i
Am very worried about this shiratori,suddenly because my
Smpathy,

Arising out of painful tears, blurred my eyes. shiratori answer i ----
Please do not worry,
I
must find a way to break this prison,and
Will be able to live forever.

That red light constantly growing and
Expanding,
This shiratori answered me-------
This is because of my self-consciousness, will, i love myself,
So, red continuous growing
-----
And expanding.
Suddenly,
I heard the thunder
Of the red light ,that the Universe
That Invisible man thinking

So,that shiratori and answered the invisible people ----this is because that i suddenly Infinitely
Gentle, sweet whispering ,
I love you, Mother Earth these words ,
This words

Opened the thunder'
Swarehouse, flying
Out of the red light thunder,
The white bird such sweet singing ,
This is because i am falling


Out of love broken heart,
I felt
Know when my
Boundless despair,
I-white bird, from my

Own high on the mountain of boundless despair,, Into the body of this black wave.
And at this time,
Invisible
Suddenly
Big screaming---------

Ah, suddenly
I am infinitely happy, because suddenly, the black wave spit this
Shiratori. at this time, thesky ,
That continue to big explosive sound ringing 1000 thunder.
And ,at this


Time,
That Shiratori
Big screaming
Ah, i
Get happy, and free because i

Was infinitely gentle, sweet said, i
love you, Mother Earth,
Suddenly, from my infinite mercy of Mother EARTH
Flying the 1000 red thunder, scared the black wave,
So the black wave

Spit me, at
This time , my
Flood of tears of happiness, flying out of my
Soul, eyes, and doves flew out of the night.
Because, this time, i discovered, felt, know the EARTH Mother,


Of
This, i found, feeling, the EARTH Mother,
Still helping me, at this time,
Thousands of
Strands of

Powerful love
Rope. from my
Mother 's love.
Flashing sting
Eyes, beautiful silver rope love,






Saved me from
The danger zone, pull into the embrace of Mother EARTH.
When i
Feeling, know me, now, i
Have returned the beauty of the Earth

Mother's arms, i
Enjoying this, my sweet boundless
Happiness
Time, then my body, began to spining,

Spinning,
Spinning.
Ii think, if
I am not
The Earth Mother, express my love to Mother EARTH,


If
I am today, not create my own to save my own truth.the dark wave,It will be my grave, ycan see The power of love magic.the most dangerousTime in my life,i express my love to Mother EARTH,
This expression, this love,
Just saved me. i think, i created this gospel, if

We can make
The world, the desperate men, knowed the gospel, might be able to
Save people in despair, and Love is the vitality, vigor,
Hope, i
Think so, i

In the past, very envyed that
Created, Or find out the truth of great men, now,
I
Envying
Myself, because suddenly

I
Created my
Own to saved my
Own
Truth, therefore, i very much envying i Own ,

Please answer me i can, or not, the envy of my own ?
The white bird such sweet,
heavy, boundless happiness,
That
No body, Invisible

Man,
This fragrance,sweet, beautiful,
Happy singing, The invisible
Man
Sing








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Listen to used
The mud did the girl,
What song to sings.

The first movement



--------- You use mud
I created, but my heart,
I used the people do not know
Many
Secret, sweet spring water. . . And some other things,
Composition is formed, Created.
My master,


You said
that you often wearing a the new green jumpsuit dress, carrying a pottery
Go blue
Behind the tall mountain
Fountain absorb water?
Shengquan you say this will be singing in the daytime, green and blue at night issued rosy flame it?
You said
your heart, you use people
Unknown
Many secrets, sweet spring water, formed, created it?
You said
your heart,
You use that springs
Fountain to fetch sweet, beautiful Italian spring water,
Sweet, beautiful Russian spring water, sweet, beautiful French spring water,
Sweet, beautiful spring of Germany, sweet, beautiful springs,
Sweet, beautiful spring, sweet, beautiful Indian springs,
Sweet, beautiful Poland spring water, sweet,
Beautiful spring of China
Wait
Composition, formation, created it?
You say that the dark, quiet
In flighting the fountain,
Often ancient flashing golden
Light, beautiful, passionate woman, man ghost chorus wizard appears,
Side light dancing while singing bitter sweet infinitely sad, happy song
It?

Like ancient Greek tragedy in the women's, men singing team's side dancing, while singing Prometheus?

You said you often
To the mysterious
God like magic springs
Fetchs spring water it?

You said
Godlike magic springs from the world
All countries
[National]depths,
Abyss in it?

Get away from here like God magical spring
Brought spring water
Use this to expand your life?

Like a glob ------ reflecting a beautiful morning,
The sun-goddess,s Seven kinds of beautiful colors, bright smile drops of water, the cries of the sea,
Used as white as snow
Boundless huge waves, to drops expand life
My master, with extremely
Sweet, cool, beautiful,
Let your heart no longer thirst voice, and so on
I sings,

--------- You use mud
I created, but my heart,
I used the people do not know
Many
Secret, sweet spring water. . . And some other things
Composition is formed, Created.
My master,




The second movement



--------- You use mud
I created, but my heart,
I used the people do not know
Many
Secret, sweet spring water. . . And some other things
,Composition is formed,Created.
My master,

Yes.
Beautiful Italy,
Beautiful russian,
Beautiful france,
The beautiful germany,
The beautiful english,
America the beautiful,
Beautiful India,
Beautiful Poland,
Beautiful China,
The compositions, formations of a mother, gave birthing to me - a daughter,
Like a collectionS of many rivers, the sea, and gave birthing to a beautiful small carp color, my master,
I used a sweet, tiny voice,

To my master,
This singing,


--------- You use mud
I created, but my heart,
I used the people do not know
Many
Secret, sweet spring water. . . And some other things,
Composition is formed, Created.
My master,


--------- You use mud
I created, but my heart,
I used the people do not know
Many
Secret, sweet spring water. . .
Composition is formed, Created.
My master,

See the fragrance of your smile constantly crowded, flying out of your lips and your sweet song,
Snow-white dove, constantly crowded, flying out of the window of the night,
I am infinitely touched

Outflow of hot, the endless happy tears,
Gardens like the beautiful moon-goddess.

Tall green trees, out of a beautiful nightingale
Heat, the boundless joy of singing,

believe that everyone can not resist your beautiful charm, will fall in love with you,
Like the great desert, thirsty camels, unable to resist water, rivers banquet held,


When you smiled and sang
You this song ----- you
This

Natural, beautiful, fresh, smooth
Magnetic flow of this song ----- Lightning ----- bright a ----- hearts of this magnetic field center,
Amazing sweet

Gentle language of flowers
The baby is as honest,

Not hypocritical smile warm spring breeze,

Beating on the door of the hearts of all people,
Like fragrance,

Leafy chorus singing the magic wand
Beating the birds
Book
House,


I believe that everyone can not resist your beautiful charm, will fall in love with you,
My master, incomparable fragrance, cool, beautiful voice, so sings to me,


--------- You use mud
I created, but my heart,
I used the people do not know
Many
Secret, sweet spring water. . . And some other things,
Composition is formed, Created.
My master,




The third movement




--------- You use mud
I created, but my heart,
I used the people do not know
Many
Secret, sweet spring water. . .
Composition is formed, Created.
My master,


I remember I -
No heart girl,

After you left,
Read a beautiful book of many countries,

I hid that often beautiful cricket
Katydid sweet,
Happy singing beautiful green grass kingdom,


At this point, I really want my own
Do one of the world's largest cultural, artistic hero
I fears, loved all life of the people inside and outside the
Passions for the non-violent revolutionaries, Mahatma Gandhi,

Mahatma Lev Tolstoy, oppositioning to the war,
Violence, I really want to've been to people's lives,
Let me do a body in hot blood flowing

Has the bones, meat,
But only in my chest,
With a beating heart,
I can only have been to people's lives,
Do a body
Hot blood flowing
Has the bones, meat,
However, I have no heart, and how to do it?

is a beautiful dream-God
Told me, in my dreams,

The dream-God with unlimited warm
The fragrance of sound,
Said to me ------ mud girl,

You pick up that blue tall
Hill behind
Spring, you will be able to use this spring
Create your heart. My master,
I used my fragrance
Sweet the sound, not the fast degrees
Nor is the slow speed
Unlimited feelings
This singing,
For my master,



Exactly what I used to in the works of the great Italian artist Michelangelo.
The great German poet Goethe works
In the works of the great Russian writer Leo Tolstoy,
The great French writer Romain Roland works
In the works of the great British philosopher Bertrand Russell,
Great American scientist Franklin's works,

In the great Indian poet Rabindranath Tagore's works,
Great Polish scientist Copernicus works
In the works of the great Chinese thinker Confucius,
Flows out of the sweet, beautiful spring
And that [the Bible], [Quran]
Buddhist classic,
Taoist classic,
The spirit of the ancient Hindu philosophy,

Honey and milk flowed out,

Flying out the fragrance of flowers, the sweet singing birds,
Creating my heart,

So, I said, is a beautiful Italian
Beautiful Russian, Beautifu French,
Beautiful German,Beautifu British,
Beautifu America,, beautiful India,
Beautiful Poland,
Beautiful China,
The compositions
The formations of a mother,
Gave birth to me - a daughter,
Yes, I am beautiful Hebrew nation,

Beautiful Arabs,s daughter,
Without this strange,
The magic's mother,

I still
Mud girl ------
That no heart
Mud girl,

My master,
I used my fragrance, sweet sound
Not fast degrees, not a slow speed,
Infinite feelings ,singing, For my master





Fourth movement




Now, I was living in that poet's hearts
He has no home, no wife,
He is very lonely,
No one
And talk to him,
To share his pain,
To share his joy,
I accepted the invitation of the poet,
Admitted to the soul of this poet's fragrance garden,

But this poet, busy writing a novel,
Drama, poetry, and to create a new philosophy,
New ideas, new music,
This poet no time,
And talk to me, so,
I live in this poet's fragrance
Garden of the soul,
Very depressed, do not know this poet,
Love me or not, but I secretly
I'm secretly in love with the poet,


However, many people fall in love with me,

Sings for me fiery love songs,

When I sat in the mind of the poet beside the window,
Singing bitter, sweet song,
People found my beautiful charm
They can not resist.
How do I do it?

I'm secretly in love with the poet,
However, many people fall in love with me,


Sings for me fiery love songs,
To addressed me,

how do I do it?

Your opinion, what is it?
My master,

I used my fragrance, sweet sound
Not fast degrees,
Not a slow speed,
Unlimited feelings,
Such singing,
For my master,


--------- You use mud
I created, but my heart,

I used the people do not know
Many
Secret, sweet spring water. . . And some other things,
Composition, formed to create.
My master,




Prometheus and the Eagle]



Suddenly blow, the black, roared eagle claws

Ripped chest that Prometheus,

Suddenly, the red blood, like a spring, from Prometheus chest,

Fly gushed,


Red ground, fragrance, beautiful white flowers, green grass,

Red like a red pigment, White, Green Paper,

Like a red flame,


Red like black eyes on a dark night,

That snakes, wolves, feared, hatred with which Eagle

Heavy chains, tied up in the cold, wet Caucasus mountains I -----

God, that belong to the human anger


Black eagle


Enormous wings

Flapping seems

To that painful burst ed my head,





Suddenly blow, the black, roared eagle claws

Ripped chest that Prometheus,

Suddenly, the red blood, like a spring, from Prometheus chest,

Fly gushed,


Red ground, fragrance, beautiful white flowers, green grass,

Red like a red pigment, White, Green Paper,

Like a red flame,


Red like black eyes on a dark night,











Like temptation Doctor Faustus

Angry devil

Hand, slapping the desk of Doctor Faustus

Requirements of Doctor Faustus, his soul

Ownership to the devil,

The angry black huge eagle wings

Flapping seems

To that is painful burst my head,



Once, twice, three times, is already ten thousand years,



One hundred million years,

eagle eating my chest,

Bared my liver,



Like a tongue of flame, eating a

Bunny,







From the hell out of the wind,ah!

Have like Death

Tower as large as

Eyes

Squally ah!

You roar!



Squally ah


You tore up the hard rock,


Tall

Mountain





However,



You forever

Unable to tear my freedom,

Independent of the great spirit,spirit,




My freedom, Independent great spirit , will - for Human all

Create, sweet, beautiful and happy,

Worthy


Hero of all heroes ----- Promethean

So bitter sweet

Singing to you,



Suddenly blow, the black, roared eagle claws

Ripped chest that Prometheus,

Suddenly, the red blood, like a spring, from Prometheus chest,

Fly gushed,


Red ground, fragrance, beautiful white flowers, green grass,

Red like a red pigment, White, Green Paper,

Like a red flame,


Red like black eyes on a dark night,






Once, twice, three times, has been a thousand years, a million years,

This eagle, eating out of my chest bare my liver,

Like a tongue of flame, eating a

Bunny,





The poet Mandela,

I give you my big voice,

I assure you big sound cries

This eagle, not only is eating your liver

But eating you, me, her, his liver,


Eating the world

All poet liver,

The poet Mandela,

I give you my big voice,

I assure you big sound cries

This eagle, not only is eating your liver

But eating you, me, her, his liver,


Eating the world

All poet liver,

The poet Mandela,

I give you my big voice,

I assure you big sound cries

This eagle, not only is eating your liver

But eating you, me, her, his liver,


Eating the world

All poet liver,

Once, twice, three times, has been a thousand years, a million years,

This eagle, eating out of my chest bare my liver,

Like a tongue of flame, eating a

Bunny,



All poets in this world,

Composed of a sacred, solemn, great Prometheus

Nine kinds of fragrance, beautiful flowers, formed a Corolla


You, me, her, him, in this world all poets,


Composed that Prometheus


All poets in this world,

Composed of a sacred, solemn, great Prometheus

Nine kinds of fragrance, beautiful flowers, formed a Corolla


You, me, her, him, in this world all poets,


Composed that Prometheus











猛然一击,那黑色,咆哮着的鹰的利爪,

撕开了那普罗米休斯的胸膛,

突然,那红色的血,象泉水一样,从普罗米休斯的胸膛中,

飞涌出来,染红了地上的,清香,美丽的白花,绿草,

像红色的颜料,染红了白纸,绿纸,

像红色的火焰,染红了像黑眼睛一样的黑夜,





那毒蛇,狼们,害怕着,仇恨着这鹰

被沉重的锁链,绑在那寒冷,潮湿的高加索山上的我-----

属于人类的神,那愤怒的黑色的鹰的巨大翅膀,

拍打着似乎要那被痛苦炸裂的我的头部,

你看见了,像诱惑浮士德博士的愤怒的那魔鬼,

用手,拍打着浮士德博士的桌子,

要求浮士德博士,把自己的灵魂的使用权,交给魔鬼,

那愤怒的,黑色的鹰的巨大翅膀,

拍打着似乎要那被痛苦炸裂的我的头部,





猛然一击,那黑色,咆哮着的鹰的利爪,

撕开了那普罗米休士的胸膛,

突然,那红色的血,象泉水一样,从普罗米休斯的胸膛中,

飞涌出来,染红了地上的,清香,美丽的白花,绿草,

像红色的颜料,染红了白纸,绿纸,

像红色的火焰,染红了像黑眼睛一样的黑夜,



一次,二次,三次,已经是一万年,一亿年,

这 鹰,吃着我的胸膛中裸露出来的我的肝,

从那地狱中出来的狂风啊,具有着像死神的,塔一样大的眼睛的狂风啊

你咆哮吧,

狂风啊,你撕碎了那坚硬的岩石,高山,

但是,你永远无法撕碎我的自由,独立的伟大意志,

我的自由,独立的伟大意志-是要为人类所有人,

创造,甜,美丽幸福,

那可敬的一切英雄中的英雄-----普罗米休斯,

这样苦甜的对你歌唱着,





猛然一击,那黑色,咆哮着的鹰的利爪,

撕开了那普罗米休士的胸膛,

突然,那红色的血,象泉水一样,从普罗米休斯的胸膛中,

飞涌出来,染红了地上的,清香,美丽的白花,绿草,

像红色的颜料,染红了白纸,绿纸,

像红色的火焰,染红了像黑眼睛一样的黑夜,





一次,二次,三次,已经是一万年,一亿年,

这 鹰,吃着我的胸膛中裸露出来的我的肝,

像火焰的舌头,吃着一个小兔,





诗人曼德拉啊,我要向你大声音疾呼,

这鹰,不仅是吃着你的肝,

而是吃着你,我,她,她的肝,吃着世界上所有诗人的肝,

诗人曼德拉啊,我要向你大声音疾呼,

这鹰,不仅是吃着你的肝,

而是吃着你,我,她,她的肝,吃着世界上所有诗人的肝,

诗人曼德拉啊,我要向你大声音疾呼,

这鹰,不仅是吃着你的肝,

而是吃着你,我,她,她的肝,吃着世界上所有诗人的肝,

一次,二次,三次,已经是一万年,一亿年,

这 鹰,吃着我的胸膛中裸露出来的我的肝,

像火焰的舌头,吃着一个小兔,



这世界上的所有诗人,

组成了那神圣,庄严,伟大的普罗米修斯,

像九种清香,美丽的花,组成了一个花冠,



猛然一击,那黑色,咆哮着的鹰的利爪,

撕开了那普罗米休士的胸膛,

突然,那红色的血,象泉水一样,从普罗米休士的胸膛中,

飞涌出来,染红了地上的,清香,美丽的白花,绿草,

像红色的颜料,染红了白纸,绿纸,

像红色的火焰,染红了像黑眼睛一样的黑夜,











冯文淑桑林作,2012,12,12,17,36





To the poet

Mandela





[Prometheus and the Eagle ]



Suddenly blows, the black, roared eagle claws
Ripped chest that Prometheus,

Suddenly, the red blood, like a spring, from Prometheus chest,
Fly gushed,

Red ground, fragrance beautiful white flowers, green grass,

Red like a red pigment, White, Green Paper,

Like a red flame,
Red like black eyes on a dark night,

That snakes, wolves, feared, hatred with which Eagle

Heavy chains, tied up in the cold, Wet Caucasus mountains I -----is a Belongs to the God of Mankind,


The angrying
Black eagle
Enormous wings

Flapping seems
To that painful burst ed my head,


Suddenly blows the black, roared eagle claws
Ripped chest that Prometheus,

Suddenly, the red blood, like a spring, from Prometheus chest,
Fly gushed,


Red ground, fragrance beautiful white flowers, green grass,
Red like a red pigment, White, Green Paper,

Like a red flame,
Red like black eyes on a dark night,


Like temptation Doctor Faustus

Angrying devil
Hand, slapping the desk of Doctor Faustus

Requirements of Doctor Faustus, his soul
Ownership to the devil,

The angrying black huge eagle wings
Flapping seems

To that is painful burst my head,


Once, twice, three times, is already ten thousand years,
One hundred million years,

eagle eating my chest,

Bared my liver,

Like a tongue of flame, eating a

Bunny,



From the hell out of the wind,ah!

Have like Death

Tower as large as

Eyes

Squally ah!

You roar!



Squally ah
You tore up the hard rock,
Tall
Mountain

However,
You forever
Unable to tear my freedom,
Independent of the great spirit,spirit,

My freedom, Independent great spirit , will - for Human all
Create, sweet beautiful and happy,

Worthy
Hero of all heroes ----- Promethean
So bitter sweet
Singing to you,



Suddenly blows, the black, roared eagle claws
Ripped chest that Prometheus,

Suddenly, the red blood, like a spring, from Prometheus chest,
Fly gushed,

Red ground, fragrance, beautiful white flowers, green grass,

Red like a red pigment, White, Green Paper,

Like a red flame,
Red like black eyes on a dark night,


Once, twice, three times, has been a thousand years, a million years,

This eagle, eating out of my chest bare my liver,

Like a tongue of flame, eating a
Bunny,


poet Mandela,
I give you my big voice,
I assure you big sound cries

This eagle, not only is eating your liver

But eating you, me, her, his liver,

Eating the world

All poet liver,


poet Mandela,
I give you my big voice,
I assure you big sound cries

This eagle, not only is eating your liver

But eating you, me, her, his liver,

Eating the world
All poet liver,

poet Mandela,
I give you my big voice,
I assure you big sound cries

This eagle, not only is eating your liver
But eating you, me, her, his liver,


Eating the world

All poet liver,

Once, twice, three times, has been a thousand years, a million years,

This eagle, eating out of my chest bare my liver,

Like a tongue of flame, eating a

Bunny,



All poets in this world,

Composed of a sacred, solemn, great Prometheus

Nine kinds of fragrance, beautiful flowers, formed a Corolla


You, me, her, him, in this world all poets,


Composed that Prometheus


All poets in this world,

Composed of a sacred, solemn, great Prometheus

Nine kinds of fragrance, beautiful flowers, formed a Corolla


You, me, her, him, in this world all poets,


Composed that Prometheus


Suddenly blow, the black, roared eagle claws

Ripped chest that Prometheus,

Suddenly, the red blood, like a spring, from Prometheus chest,

Fly gushed,


Red ground, fragrance, beautiful white flowers, green grass,

Red like a red pigment, White, Green Paper,

Like a red flame,


Red like black eyes on a dark night,
























by the Chinese poet fengwenshu -sanglim make,



2012-09-30 20.09
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