My idea-a wet t-shirt contest with suburban moms

[sensualwrtr]

Originally Posted by hyde69

just bumping my thread. are there any people here who'd be willing to turn my idea into a story? any women who'd like to try? i'd love to see what a female writer would do with my story idea.

The concept has some legs ( every pun intended ;-) ). I think the situation should have a clutch of older ladies that are kind of led by a slightly more adventerous dominant lady in the group. The event starts when they travel to Key West, right before fantasy fest weekend while aboard one of their husbands yachts. They are all unaware of what Fantasy Fest is all about perhaps except the leading lady... They get sideways drunk at Hemingways the night before Fantasy fest and become wrapped up in the whole celebration ever more so as the night roles on, until by the end they are all painted nude and one is giving a BJ in an ally while the rest watch and possible touch themselves...???

[hyde69]

hi. this is for sensulwrtr. would you be willing to write a story? how would these older women meet up with their sons & put on a wet t-shirt contest for them? how many moms would there be?

[sensualwrtr]

Originally Posted by hyde69

hi. this is for sensulwrtr. would you be willing to write a story? how would these older women meet up with their sons & put on a wet t-shirt contest for them? how many moms would there be?

Actually, my treatment does not incorporate any "sons", not my bag man... sorry. I do have a story I am writing about some experiences I had in Key West acumulated over the past couple of years into a single story event...

[hyde69]

are there any women writers here who'd be willing to write a story based on my idea?

[hyde69]

just bumping up this thread. are there any people here who'd be interested in writing a story based on my idea? any women who'd want to try?

[hyde69]

just bumping up my thread. are there any female writers on this site who like my idea for a story? any who'd be willing create a story based on my idea? reply here if you're interested.

[hyde69]

just bumping up my thread. would love it if a female writer would be willing to turn my idea into a story. are there any women who might be interested? any women out there who like my idea for a story?

[MatthewVett]

After four bumps with no replies, it might be time to give it up.

[MyRubiLips]

After reading the thread title, I was curious to know if anyone ever wrote this. If I may ask, is there any reason you're looking for female authors only? When I've read various "mom/son" posts/threads on Lit, it seems it's the males who are more active in the discussion!

have you tried writing this, hyde? After all, with the volunteer editors here to help you with grammar and the like, it seems only you can truly understand your desires!

[Thecsm]

This could be a great story....but why would the Mom's want to do a wet t shirt contest for thier sons.......

[JRaven]

I started writing this for Hyde when he first posted this thread in 2011.

He tends to be a bit impatient. It was less than a month when he bumped his thread to get someone else to write it. But I'd already started.


Hyde kept asking me to send him what I had so far. Most authors working on a long, drawn out story tend to be protective about it. When I finally sent the first chapter, I was afraid he'd copy/paste and post it as his own.

When Hyde read it, he said he needed a black girl in the story. Since I had already written the first part of the story, I had to go back and and do a complete re-write to include her. Then he absolutely had to have an Asian girl in the story. I had to introduce the group all at once in order to work in the reason all these women were doing a wet t-shirt contest for their sons. Every change took a complete re-write.

Then it was "well they have to do this", "they have to do that". I got fed up with him. There's a fair chance I'll eventually post the story. But don't hold your breath.

Yea, he wants every race imaginable, every mother fucking all the sons, including their own, but not do this or not do that. He doesn't understand that he only posted a story idea. How it actually works out is up to the author, not him.

Maybe some day I'll finish the story as I see it.

Jenny

[sirhugs]

Originally Posted by JRaven

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Maybe some day I'll finish the story as I see it.

Jenny

I hope you do

[MyRubiLips]

Originally Posted by JRaven

I started writing this for Hyde when he first posted this thread in 2011.

He tends to be a bit impatient. It was less than a month when he bumped his thread to get someone else to write it. But I'd already started.


Hyde kept asking me to send him what I had so far. Most authors working on a long, drawn out story tend to be protective about it. When I finally sent the first chapter, I was afraid he'd copy/paste and post it as his own.

When Hyde read it, he said he needed a black girl in the story. Since I had already written the first part of the story, I had to go back and and do a complete re-write to include her. Then he absolutely had to have an Asian girl in the story. I had to introduce the group all at once in order to work in the reason all these women were doing a wet t-shirt contest for their sons. Every change took a complete re-write.

Then it was "well they have to do this", "they have to do that". I got fed up with him. There's a fair chance I'll eventually post the story. But don't hold your breath.

Yea, he wants every race imaginable, every mother fucking all the sons, including their own, but not do this or not do that. He doesn't understand that he only posted a story idea. How it actually works out is up to the author, not him.

Maybe some day I'll finish the story as I see it.

Jenny

Yikes! This reminds me of Brett's post to me in the "Welcome to Story Ideas/introduce yourself" thread where I made my first two posts to the site. I had said I wasn't apposed to writing "custom" stories for others, but that they needed to realize that I did need to have an interest in their idea first, etc. Brett cautioned me "not to write for others" and to only write for myself. I have a feeling that this type of guy (the OP) and scenario may be what Brett was talking about!!

[Thecsm]

@ JRaven Jenny I hope you finnish the story. Sounds like it would be a good one.