My first story

[shelbakk]

Have a read of my first story please and tell me what you think. I know there was a lot of grammer issues, but I hope the story was a little exciting?!

http://www.literotica.com/s/my-born-...christian-wife

[Bramblethorn]

Originally Posted by shelbakk

Have a read of my first story please and tell me what you think. I know there was a lot of grammer issues, but I hope the story was a little exciting?!

http://www.literotica.com/s/my-born-...christian-wife

I think you didn't need to post this in three different places, especially since it has maybe one sentence that could be considered "BDSM".

[Sir_Winston54]

A waste of pixels in this forum, especially since the Talk forum is for discussion of BDSM TOPICS. It might have fit into the Café, except for the minor fact that, as Bramblethorn stated, there was maybe one sentence that could be considered "BDSM" (and that only if one is *very* liberal in applying that descriptor).

[midwestyankee]

Why would anyone knowingly publish a story with "grammar issues" in the first place? And then, how does one think that admitting such malfeasance is going to attract readers? The mind fairly boggles.