I have just recently released my first ever story: "The making of Chloé". In short: it is about a mad scientist who merges three women into one in order to create the perfect woman: a super smart, sexy fulfillment of every man's dreams. You can have a look here http://www.literotica.com/s/the-making-of-chloe
I would be grateful for your feedback and also for your concrete suggestions on where to take the story next.
Firstly, it would be great to get some idea about what parts of the story until now are appealing and which ones aren't - so that I can work on expanding the interesting, sexy stuff for you.
Secondly, I can take this one into many different directions now: I could go about training her in the laboratory, or sending her into the world (think of Species but replace horror with sex). The world outside could be a sci-fi future or close to the world as we know it. Also, I would be interested in figuring out how to further develop her character: are negative parts of the previous three women's character still shining through and does she have a memory? Should her drive be a search for identity or a fulfillment of her sexual desires? And/or should she be controlled by the mad scientist in some way?
thanks for your suggestions!