Old 11-25-2012, 03:40 AM   #1
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Suddenly Taken

Hey guys, I'm kinda new here, but I got something I kinda wanna see/read. I apologize way ahead of time if my request is pretty detailed, but as a married and mothered female of 31, I rarely have time for indulging fantasies, and this is one I kinda really want to read over. So apologizes ahead of time for specifications.

Anyhow, I've always had a fantasy of suddenly being taken without warning. Not talking about rape here, just instead the thought of someone coming up behind me, flipping up my skirt, and just having fun. More public, the better. Here's things I really want in my story, and please try to include them all.

1) Suddenly taken. Basically what I said above, it doesn't matter where I'm taken. A bar, on a bus, on a subway, or a theatre are preferences (really prefering a bus or subway), but anywhere you really want this fantasy to happen, you're game. Just needs to be sudden, without warning or being called out or anything. I want it to be sudden and relentless, to be taken wholy and out of my control, and I want no warning before it happens.

2) Clothing. One thing missing in a lot of fiction is the erotic nature of just being clothed period. Its far more sexy to describe the swell of a breast or the hardness of a nipple behind a shirt than without, and I want my clothing to stay on as long as possible. This isn't me being prude, but rather sexiness of being clothed itself while completely taken. Too many fics will go into detail about how hot a female is in clothing, but come time for the sex, the clothing is ripped off or otherwise forgotten. Now, a breast falling out of a shirt from being fucked too hard and bounced too much, or a skirt riding up above my hips, thats fine, as long as parts stay on as long as possible. Oh and as far as clothing, i prefer being in a skirt as well as a button up blouse or the like. Being in power suits and the like really turn me on. And go ahead and make me sexy. Being a mother for too long has made me feel anything but.

3) Please make it be from my point of view, and not the males. I don't really care about the male himself, just the being taken. Or males. The numbers matter not. And, a bit more selfish, can a female herself write it? Males really have a harder time describing the feelings and emotions a woman has while under being completely taken out of one's control.

That's it. The details I leave to you wonderful authors to come up with. This is a personal fantasy I've had for years but just never have been able to have done, and if I can get even one long and hot story about this, I'll be eternally grateful!

And again, apologizes if this is too specific or demanding... First time doing this kind of thing...
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Old 11-25-2012, 05:22 PM   #2
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If you can't find a female writer for this and are willing to lower your standards a little (i.e. use a male author), let me know I might be willing to have a crack at this.

You can click on the link in my sig to see the stories I've posted here and my writing style.

Otherwise, good luck with your story.
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Old 11-25-2012, 06:10 PM   #3
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What about this isn't rape. Clearly you are not giving consent.
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Old 11-25-2012, 06:44 PM   #4
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There are quite a few stories...

http://www.literotica.com/s/subway-surprise-1

http://www.literotica.com/s/a-midnight-train

Here are just a couple I found in the non-consent/reluctance genre.
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Old 11-26-2012, 12:53 AM   #5
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What about this isn't rape. Clearly you are not giving consent.
Who said I'm not giving consent? Not once did I state I would not get into it or try to get away or anything? Being taken suddenly =/= being raped if you enjoy it or don't try to get away or anything. There's reluctance and then there's rape; in no way do I want the latter.

EDIT: Let me clarify. The fantasy is that, a fantasy, to be taken. Do not want to be demeaned or called names or physically hurt or the like. I'm not into being belittled or hurt or anything of the such. And I apologize if it came off otherwise!

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Old 12-01-2012, 08:48 PM   #6
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Who said I'm not giving consent? Not once did I state I would not get into it or try to get away or anything? Being taken suddenly =/= being raped if you enjoy it or don't try to get away or anything. There's reluctance and then there's rape; in no way do I want the latter.

EDIT: Let me clarify. The fantasy is that, a fantasy, to be taken. Do not want to be demeaned or called names or physically hurt or the like. I'm not into being belittled or hurt or anything of the such. And I apologize if it came off otherwise!
I assume that you prefer not to be the initiator of this tryst. For instance, the first episode in my Doctor of Desire series has a woman drag the aforementioned doctor into a stairwell at her work and have him roister her against the wall. It's all about surprise and appetite. since I'm a guy I won't jump into this one, but I like the idea of the spontaneity. From the guy POV I am trying to figure a situation where he is close, hard and ready to ride within a few moments. Couple on the dance floor is an obvious one; but your fantasy asks that they basically be strangers. Here's some possibles: Toga party, beach party, skinny dipping at the lake, shower in a coed dorm, dancers (I like that one), actors backstage.
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Old 12-15-2012, 09:30 PM   #7
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Sorry its been a while since I could hit the forums.

LargoKitt, yeah i prefer total strangers, but anything goes. If you're taking, you're the artist. Of the ones you mentioned, I prefer the dancers idea too. Maybe something in a bar or club?

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Old 12-15-2012, 09:33 PM   #8
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And at this point, a male writer would be fine too! I just want to see this fantasy come to life.
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Old 12-28-2012, 12:07 AM   #9
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le bump. still really wanting to see this!
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Old 12-28-2012, 04:30 AM   #10
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Talking I think I can help!

I really like your idea, and the power suit thing got me thinking. What if this is a colleague who happened to overhear you talking to a friend? That won't be a complete stranger, but the office is a great place for surprise encounters. My stories haven't been approved yet, but i could send you some things I've written. The only thing is I don't know how long I can draw it out. My stories are on the shorter side and if you don't know this person, there won't be a lot of build up.I guess there could be a lot of sex, though, and multiple encounters. Maybe it starts happening so often that you are getting frustrated and can't focus on work.
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Old 12-28-2012, 02:49 PM   #11
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LOL However you want to do it. I'm leaving myself in the writer's hands here, so to speak. ;-) I prefer a bit longer, and I do like the idea of multiple encounters, though... That would be pretty intense, I think!
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Old 12-29-2012, 04:52 PM   #12
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Bus in the rain

Shit my car broke down again its raining again is my day going to get any worse I started to walk home when I saw the lights of a bus I was not at a stop but I tried to flag it down and lucky for me it stopped. The doors opened and I stepped on it was not a service bus and I only realised this when I got on but the driver said that he couldn’t let a woman walk and the rugby team didn’t mind the view of my tits through my wet tee shirt.

I asked the driver to drop me a few miles up the road and thanked him and went to sit down behind him but that seat was taken I was half way back the bus when a guy said sit here and I did he was drunk but he seemed ok and I sat on the edge of the seat with my feet in the isle he reached around me and caressed my tits pulling me back then the man opposite moved towards me pushing up my short skirt pulling my panties down as the drunk grip got tighter on me.

My panties were wet as was my skirt but he had pulled them off and through them down the bus then started to finger my creases until his fingers found its way into me I tried to resist but the drunk had his hand firmly over my mouth he started to finger fuck me one finger then two forcing my legs apart I had always liked a little force while having sex so this sort of exited me, I knew where this was going and soon he was fucking me no condom but I didn’t care I hand had such a bad day a good fuck was just what I wanted but when he pulled out and shot his cum over my now naked tits then a second man took his place I realised I might be getting more than I had bargained for.

hows this for a way of going
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