Black cock invades two hot moms, guided by sons' sexy crush

[PurpleMonkeyDishwash]

http://www.literotica.com/s/but-mom-hes-black-pt-01

This is the first nine chapters of a long story I'm writing. To summarize, a young BBC-loving Jewish girl named Maddie starts being tutored for two nerds. When she discovers both nerds each have extremely sexy young mothers, she brings in her black boyfriend, and the young couple begins to seduce the moms and teach them to live a sexier lifestyle.

I'm interested in hearing suggesting about how to continue the story. I haven't begun writing yet, and so I wanted some story ideas from different people to see how the story could and should move.

[sassysasha89]

Are the mothers married?

[PurpleMonkeyDishwash]

Originally Posted by sassysasha89

Are the mothers married?

No, one had the son out of wedlock with a random stranger, the other is a trophy wife whose husband has been long dead.

[tapeworm]

Originally Posted by PurpleMonkeyDishwash

http://www.literotica.com/s/but-mom-hes-black-pt-01

This is the first nine chapters of a long story I'm writing. To summarize, a young BBC-loving Jewish girl named Maddie starts being tutored for two nerds. When she discovers both nerds each have extremely sexy young mothers, she brings in her black boyfriend, and the young couple begins to seduce the moms and teach them to live a sexier lifestyle.

I'm interested in hearing suggesting about how to continue the story. I haven't begun writing yet, and so I wanted some story ideas from different people to see how the story could and should move.

Hmm. Perhaps the two nerds ge up to sometthing that could get them into lots of trouble if the truth ever slips out and they require the Jewish chick and her black boyfriend to bail them out..

[PurpleMonkeyDishwash]

Originally Posted by tapeworm

Hmm. Perhaps the two nerds ge up to sometthing that could get them into lots of trouble if the truth ever slips out and they require the Jewish chick and her black boyfriend to bail them out..

I like that. Maybe since they each find the other's mom so attractive, they sell her underwear to pay for video games, but get arrested.

[tapeworm]

Originally Posted by PurpleMonkeyDishwash

I like that. Maybe since they each find the other's mom so attractive, they sell her underwear to pay for video games, but get arrested.

If you want to take the humiliation to a further level, how do you feel about them being forced to wear panties while their moms get fucked? I've actually comes across a confession on the internet by this mature aged mom who admitted that her adult son had taken to wearing his wife's undies.

[PurpleMonkeyDishwash]

Originally Posted by tapeworm

If you want to take the humiliation to a further level, how do you feel about them being forced to wear panties while their moms get fucked? I've actually comes across a confession on the internet by this mature aged mom who admitted that her adult son had taken to wearing his wife's undies.

That would make some of the characters fetishists. Obviously the audience of the story is getting off because they like humiliation, but I think it's hotter if the sons in this story are just normal, non-humiliation-loving sons and the moms, while maybe having a small streak of humiliation loving, aren't actively trying to humiliate their sons in that way. Like the moms humiliate their sons indirectly in the pursuit of their own pleasure, not in pursuit of the sons' humiliation.

[HeyAll]

I really loved this story when I read it (took me two reads). I left on comment as well.

It's the kind of writing I like, where you casually read through it, and you can visual what's going on as if you're watching a tv show, because the dialogue is so smooth and the feelings are explained.


Anyway, if you need ideas, here are some:

-Perhaps it begins with both mother's profusely apologizing two their son's (different scenes). They don't know what came over them, it just happened.

-Maggie & her friend talk (while she's giving him oral, or a hand job) and they compare notes about what's been going on. They're both surprised by it and Maggie thinks it's cute. Perhaps she's turned on by the idea of getting those 2 moms further involved, and maybe she takes a special interest in Chaz's mom because she really looks up to her. So this is kind of Maggie's way of kissing up to her since they have similar intersts in life (and are both Jewish)

-Maybe things heat up when Maggie and her friend go to visit the latina mother, and Maggie watches them have sex. She's naked too, touches herself, and joins in.

Facebook is mentioned a lot. Perhaps Maggie puts edited pictures on her Facebook and the son is freaked out horribly (he's with Chaz at the time and they talk about it)

-Perhaps the story ends Chaz and Roger going to Chaz's house, and they watch Stone & Reshawn taking turns on both of their mother's (perhaps even more people). It's a graphic orgy. Maggie is naked again, sweaty, and tells them to just relax and accept it.

Perhaps Chaz's Jewish mother sees the boys watching and she tries to stop it, she's freaked out, but the guy fucking her doesn't care and just keeps going.

best of luck


btw, I agree that the Jewish thing is really hot. I loved the mentions of that in your story, in the dialogue between Maddie and Stone. Bring that up more in discussions between Maddie and Chaz, and his mother.

[sirhugs]

more please sir.

though I'd prefer more of the younger generation, less of the BBC worship, but that's just me.

[PurpleMonkeyDishwash]

Originally Posted by HeyAll

I really loved this story when I read it (took me two reads). I left on comment as well.

It's the kind of writing I like, where you casually read through it, and you can visual what's going on as if you're watching a tv show, because the dialogue is so smooth and the feelings are explained.


Anyway, if you need ideas, here are some:

-Perhaps it begins with both mother's profusely apologizing two their son's (different scenes). They don't know what came over them, it just happened.

-Maggie & her friend talk (while she's giving him oral, or a hand job) and they compare notes about what's been going on. They're both surprised by it and Maggie thinks it's cute. Perhaps she's turned on by the idea of getting those 2 moms further involved, and maybe she takes a special interest in Chaz's mom because she really looks up to her. So this is kind of Maggie's way of kissing up to her since they have similar intersts in life (and are both Jewish)

-Maybe things heat up when Maggie and her friend go to visit the latina mother, and Maggie watches them have sex. She's naked too, touches herself, and joins in.

Facebook is mentioned a lot. Perhaps Maggie puts edited pictures on her Facebook and the son is freaked out horribly (he's with Chaz at the time and they talk about it)

-Perhaps the story ends Chaz and Roger going to Chaz's house, and they watch Stone & Reshawn taking turns on both of their mother's (perhaps even more people). It's a graphic orgy. Maggie is naked again, sweaty, and tells them to just relax and accept it.

Perhaps Chaz's Jewish mother sees the boys watching and she tries to stop it, she's freaked out, but the guy fucking her doesn't care and just keeps going.

best of luck


btw, I agree that the Jewish thing is really hot. I loved the mentions of that in your story, in the dialogue between Maddie and Stone. Bring that up more in discussions between Maddie and Chaz, and his mother.

I like these. I definitely want to do more with the Jewish stuff. I think it's very sexy the way Sondra and Maddie are both Jewish and both learn to crave BBC.

[HeyAll]

Perhaps if you want to do more with the Jewish stuff, you could have either Maddie's parents, or Sondra's ex-husband randomly come back in the picture and be shocked at what they find, only to hear a detailed explination.

If that's too many characters, perhaps you could have Chaz remind his mother about all that stuff she used to tell him that Jewish people should only date their own. She agrees. But tells him that it's very difficult to explain, and tries her best to explain her sexual situation so that he could understand, which only leaves him feeling more humiliated.

[PurpleMonkeyDishwash]

Originally Posted by HeyAll

Perhaps if you want to do more with the Jewish stuff, you could have either Maddie's parents, or Sondra's ex-husband randomly come back in the picture and be shocked at what they find, only to hear a detailed explination.

If that's too many characters, perhaps you could have Chaz remind his mother about all that stuff she used to tell him that Jewish people should only date their own. She agrees. But tells him that it's very difficult to explain, and tries her best to explain her sexual situation so that he could understand, which only leaves him feeling more humiliated.

I am pretty concerned about the character count, but I love that second idea. It would be really excruciating to have Sondra have to weasel her way into explaining her lust to her son.

[HeyAll]

Yeah, if you really wanted to get hardcore about it, perhaps it's Chaz's birthday or a Jewish holiday...which makes things even tougher for her. She's not even sure what's going on with her, all she knows is that she can't fight it, but she tries her best to explain it because she wants to be a good mother and has always preached honesty and respect.

And if you want a more degrading ending, how about both mothers are getting gangbanged in Sondra's pool area. The sons watch in horror as Maddie directs it, and explains it to the sons that this is the new normal. AND there were a bunch of rich neighbors watching from their balconies. Some looked on in horror, other's laughed at how degraded it looked, and maybe one pervert classmate watched while recording it with a smile.

[PurpleMonkeyDishwash]

Originally Posted by HeyAll

Yeah, if you really wanted to get hardcore about it, perhaps it's Chaz's birthday or a Jewish holiday...which makes things even tougher for her. She's not even sure what's going on with her, all she knows is that she can't fight it, but she tries her best to explain it because she wants to be a good mother and has always preached honesty and respect.

And if you want a more degrading ending, how about both mothers are getting gangbanged in Sondra's pool area. The sons watch in horror as Maddie directs it, and explains it to the sons that this is the new normal. AND there were a bunch of rich neighbors watching from their balconies. Some looked on in horror, other's laughed at how degraded it looked, and maybe one pervert classmate watched while recording it with a smile.

That's a sexy idea. I like the idea of the spotlight being directed at Sondra to be a good mother, to be a good jew, but her absolutely failing in a public ecstatic way to those duties. Reshawn and Stone and any BBC would be just an irresistible temptation. A scene at Chaz's birthday party, or something in temple or in a Jewish social function, that would be very humiliating and erotic.

That final scene is also really interesting. I'm imagining a gangbang that evolves from a party. The boys come over to find Sondra and Lauren have invited over all these black sex gods, and everyone is lounging out by the pool. The backyard would be very crowded, there would be a barbecue. The only non-black people there would be the mothers and Maddie, and they would also be the only women. When the sons arrive, the display would be so volatile, loud, and raucous that the evolution into a gangbang would be natural. Maddie directing is also a great idea. I like the idea of the three of them standing on the sideline for most of it, until invariably Maddie gets drawn in near the end. Maddie is sexy, but she works best I think as an instrument to the greater sexuality of the mothers, and the sons' humiliation that comes with it.

[HeyAll]

That humiliating conversation should be at the beginning of the story. Perhaps she gives a long dialogue about how she's been a good girl all her life and she doesn't know what happened. And she keeps on apologizing profusely and tries to explain herself to him, to maintain her status as a good mother.

Perhaps after that, there's a scene with Maddie & Reshawn talking about how fun that was. They trade notes and decided to continue it. Maddie says she loved seeing the look on Chaz's face, and Reshawn loved the look on Rogers face. They decide to continue because they think it's funny to ruin their suburban families.

Perhaps Chaz has a birthday party or something filled with family and respected members of the community, and Reshawn shows up. Sondra demands he leaves, he refuses, so she gives him oral in the bathroom to shut him up so he would go away.

Maybe after that, both mother's have a long discussion about how ashamed they feel. They decide they want to stop. But Maddie brings Reshawn and Stone over and that changes.

Chaz & that other guy look at Maddie's Facebook to find there's a party going on at Chaz's house. Chaz is freaked and they both head home to find a gangbang going on. A humiliating one. Neighbors watching and everything. Sondra is freaked out that her son is watching but is helpless.

[PurpleMonkeyDishwash]

Originally Posted by HeyAll

That humiliating conversation should be at the beginning of the story. Perhaps she gives a long dialogue about how she's been a good girl all her life and she doesn't know what happened. And she keeps on apologizing profusely and tries to explain herself to him, to maintain her status as a good mother.

Perhaps after that, there's a scene with Maddie & Reshawn talking about how fun that was. They trade notes and decided to continue it. Maddie says she loved seeing the look on Chaz's face, and Reshawn loved the look on Rogers face. They decide to continue because they think it's funny to ruin their suburban families.

Perhaps Chaz has a birthday party or something filled with family and respected members of the community, and Reshawn shows up. Sondra demands he leaves, he refuses, so she gives him oral in the bathroom to shut him up so he would go away.

Maybe after that, both mother's have a long discussion about how ashamed they feel. They decide they want to stop. But Maddie brings Reshawn and Stone over and that changes.

Chaz & that other guy look at Maddie's Facebook to find there's a party going on at Chaz's house. Chaz is freaked and they both head home to find a gangbang going on. A humiliating one. Neighbors watching and everything. Sondra is freaked out that her son is watching but is helpless.

Here's a barebones outline of what we've got so far:

Chaz wakes up the next morning in his bed, disturbed. He goes into the kitchen to talk with his mother, who dotes on him and makes him eggs and is all loving. Chaz doesn't want to even think about the night before, but Sondra pushes it onto him. He resits but eventually blurts out that he doesn't understand how she can be on the fundraising committee for their Temple, basically a model Jew woman, and then do also fuck random black men as vigorously as she did the night before. We get an awkward, sexy, radical speech from Sondra in which she reconciles the two poorly.

We cut to a flashback of Lauren, when she was younger. She's out clubbing, Roger isn't even born. She talks with her friend about alcohol and parties, and the friend warns Lauren about how horny she always gets when she drinks. We get a scene of Lauren doing something publicly sexual with a big black cock. Flash forwards to today, when Lauren is remembering this. She feels bad. She apologizes to Roger, but in the course of their discussion, Lauren realizes she can't promise to him that she won't do it again.

Maddie and Reshawn walk their the halls of school talking about the moms. They both agree to corrupt both moms together, but since Reshawn has already fucked Lauren, they agree to begin with Chaz. Chaz sees them in the hallway and runs off. They track him down and ask him why he was running from them. Chaz doesn't want to talk to them, but Reshawn physically manipulates him until he starts talking. Chaz tells them about Sondra, and how uncomfortable he is. The two laugh. They tell him he's just scared of the big black dick. He needs to learn to accept it instead of fear it. Chaz doesn't want to. Reshawn whips his out, Maddie gives a speech about how great it is. (I'm picturing this: ). She even gives it a big lick, like an ice cream cone. The confrontation ends when Maddie forces Chaz to wrap his fingers around the member, but it doesn't go any farther.

Maddie stops by Lauren's house to give Roger more homework. The two talk about the night where Reshawn fucked her, and end up talking about clothes. Maddie thinks Lauren needs to do more with her breasts. Maddie goes through her closet, picking out different combinations of clothes to show off Lauren's bust. Roger comes home to find his mother in a busty outfit with Maddie. He looks at his mother's chest and begins to see why others might think of her as sexy, and he understands a bit why she couldn't promise him she wouldn't fuck more black guys.

It's the weekend, and Sondra is throwing a Temple fundraiser at her home. All the Jews are in the backyard. Maddie wears a white sun dress and chats with Chaz as they survey the party. She notes how elegant Sondra is. Reshawn comes in, and Maddie scurries away from Chaz to talk to some friends, leaving him alone with Reshawn. Chaz chases Reshawn out of the backyard and into Sondra's bedroom. There is a window out into the backyard from there. Reshawn says now that he's horny, he wants to fuck, and there are so many sexy Jews out there. Chaz is able to contain him in the bedroom, but he is forced to watch as Reshawn jerks his big hard cock while looking outside at the party. In cumming, Reshawn makes a huge mess in the room, and Chaz is left to clean it up. Satisfied partially, Reshawn says he will be back later when he's horny again to fuck Chaz's mom.


At about 6pm, the last of Sondra's guests have left. Chaz has cleaned her room of all Reshawn's cum. Reshawn pulls up in his car to Lauren's house. He tells Roger the story of how he went to Chaz's looking to fuck Sondra and was distracted by Chaz, and says that he's not going to let Roger distract him the same way. Roger gives a huge speech about how hot Sondra is, hoping to convince him to go to Chaz's house instead of fucking Lauren again. Reshawn rebukes it with comments about how hot Lauren is. Roger feels guilt about selling out his best friend's mom, but he doesn't want his own mom to get fucked again. Reshawn finally agrees to stop by Sondra's house again, but he insists on bringing Lauren with him so that if Chaz tricks him again, he can just fuck Lauren then and there. Roger insists on coming to.

Reshawn texts Maddie all of this information, and she proposes a devious scheme. Texting many of her old black lovers and Reshawn's friends, she basically brings an entourage of steamy hot black men to show up at Sondra' house with Reshawn. The black men invade Sondra's house, which is still full of food and party accessories from the fundraiser. It's late in the evening now, and Reshawn and the other black men are throwing a raucous party. Lauren, with a new sense or pride from Maddie's fashion lessons, dons a tiny bikini that she borrows from Sondra. Sondra, seeing Maddie's trick and liking it, dons an equally small bikini. The black men swim, smoke cigars, blast music, and make tons of BBQ in Chaz's backyard. Many many black men flirt with the skantily clad moms. The neighbors wake up at the loud sounds, but the partiers threaten them into not calling the cops.

Roger and Chaz retreat into the house. Maddie comes in to get them, crafting a narrative about the outside party about how it's like a sexy utopia. Chaz compares this scene to the wealthy jewish party that was on the same grounds just hours before. When the boys still fail to come outside, she entices them by promising them each handjobs.

The two reluctantly come out to the party. Maddie insists that the handjobs have to be given publicly, out here in front of all the black men and even their moms. The boys are shy to remove their pants, but Maddie gets some of the bigger black men to remove the pants for them.

There is some sph as Maddie gives a public speech about the size of these boys' cocks. Both the mothers are embarrassed at the lack of both their sons in sexual quality. Maddie invites the men to show a more manly penis size, and soon, most of the party goers have their big black cocks in hand. The two mothers are absorbed into the crowd of black flesh, and their bikinis are pulled off their bodies. Reshawn is the first to plunge into Sondra, and we get a graphic gang bang of the moms.

Maddie sits down at the entrance to the house with the boys. She holds their cocks in hand and strokes them both simultaneously as she promise. Both are looking at the other's gangbanged mom, but the sexuality of their own moms draws more of their attention than they each would like. Maddie speaks to them slowly, dictating to them the scene before them, praising the black cock as ultimate.

The two boys cum in Maddie's hands, but their release is juxtaposed with the massive spraying of cum from the black hoses in front them. They sit with their soft cocks in Maddie's sticky palms watching. Eventually, Reshawn comes over and Maddie sucks him off where she sits, swallowing his load right next to the boys.

The final scene is the two cum drenched mothers, satisfied and fucked, making out with each other as the black crowd hollers and cheers.

[HeyAll]

Holy shit that sounds hot.

How long will it take to write this?


And are you sure about this scene?

It's the weekend, and Sondra is throwing a Temple fundraiser at her home. All the Jews are in the backyard. Maddie wears a white sun dress and chats with Chaz as they survey the party. She notes how elegant Sondra is. Reshawn comes in, and Maddie scurries away from Chaz to talk to some friends, leaving him alone with Reshawn. Chaz chases Reshawn out of the backyard and into Sondra's bedroom. There is a window out into the backyard from there. Reshawn says now that he's horny, he wants to fuck, and there are so many sexy Jews out there. Chaz is able to contain him in the bedroom, but he is forced to watch as Reshawn jerks his big hard cock while looking outside at the party. In cumming, Reshawn makes a huge mess in the room, and Chaz is left to clean it up. Satisfied partially, Reshawn says he will be back later when he's horny again to fuck Chaz's mom.

I don't get it. Why not have Sondra take Reshawn to the bathroom to quickly get him off or something? Maybe they're in the bedroom, and he's looking out the window while getting blown, and the guests have no idea what's going on. She's freaked, but wants to do it as fast as possible.

[PurpleMonkeyDishwash]

Originally Posted by HeyAll

Holy shit that sounds hot.

How long will it take to write this?


And are you sure about this scene?



I don't get it. Why not have Sondra take Reshawn to the bathroom to quickly get him off or something? Maybe they're in the bedroom, and he's looking out the window while getting blown, and the guests have no idea what's going on. She's freaked, but wants to do it as fast as possible.

I like the idea of Chaz being brought into the event in a way that isn't very sexual to him. We have so many opportunities for Reshawn to fuck the moms, to fuck Maddie. This was my way of getting Chaz in the scene without suddenly turning him gay. No one should be suddenly turned gay (except maybe the moms), but it's okay for them to ease into some forced bi.

[HeyAll]

Wonderful. So how long do you think it takes to write this?

best of luck

[PurpleMonkeyDishwash]

Originally Posted by HeyAll

Wonderful. So how long do you think it takes to write this?

best of luck

Not sure, but I would not say soon. I enjoy outlining, though, and it's worth continuing.

[shitfacedcockmaster]

hey how about, lauren is getting mad at roger, and she smacks him, but how about she grabs reshawns cock, and doesnt realize that she is smacking her son with it cuase she is so mad, and she is holding onto it so tight in her grip

what if one of maddies friends, sees that video of the mom and the black guy in the pool, and the video was on face book for a couple days, and the friend teases chaz how much that video turnd her on


the moms should interact with the friends


cum should shoot on chaz when reshawn is jerking off

the moms bikini's should be so small it only covers there tits but with massive boob flesh pooring out the sides and the top and bottom

maybe lauren eats out maddie when they go shopping and maddie moans really loud like they are in a dressing room or something

maybe some more lesbian stuff

how about the moms have some suprise sex when around the sons, with other people and the sons have to realize what they are doing

maybe at the party reshawn can secretly jizz in the food that is white


i feel that your outline might be a little short and needs some more stuff, maybe you guys can mix your thoughs and make ideas out of some of these ideas, and come up with some great ideas

[shitfacedcockmaster]

maybe lauren and sondra, think the only way that their sons will lissen to them, is by fucking the black guys infront of them, like they think this is a good punishment sense it is the only thing working at the moment, they only do this cuase they think they must and it could be a good parenting skill for them

[shitfacedcockmaster]

dealing with the moms, reshawn and maddies homework lowers the boys, grades becuase they are not focusing on their own work, and the moms get mad about this.

one mom maybe brings the homework in for maddie and the boys are in class with them, maybe it leads to the mom sucking down a huge cock infront of the class, with the mom going "mmmmmm" really loud as her mouth streches all the way down and swallows the whole cock and every one is impressd

maybe when the mom apologizes to her son, it basically sounds and meens that she wish her son wasnt born

[shitfacedcockmaster]

what if lauren was hugging roger and squishing her breasts on him when they hug and it is getting uncomfortable for him.

what if when maddie forces them to watch the moms have sex, when she is jerking them off, roger cant help but stare at his mom even though he does not want to, but he cant keep focus off of his naked mom as he gets jerkd off.

maybe when sondra sees rogers penis, she regrets saying that one thing about roger, rember when she said that roger is a real man when he help her around the house.

this is what you should base the moms bikini's off and what roger and chaz see


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