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Old 10-29-2012, 07:58 PM   #1
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I put a bunch of words together, but I'm not sure they are in the right order...

Howdy!

I have a several stories ready for an editor and I need you!

Firstly, here's my old stuff:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/me...ge=submissions

Secondly, a brief description of what I need edited:

Bed Full of Pussy. 3900 words. Group Sex.

I Tripped Down the Stairs... 3300 words. Erotic Couplings. Still working on the title.

Number One. 4050 words. Erotic Couplings.

Gina at a Wedding. 5700 words. Erotic Couplings.

The Minotaur. 11,600 words. Non-human/mythical

(In Charge ch. 1 is already posted.)
In Charge Ch. 2. 6300 words. Erotic Couplings.

In Charge Ch. 3. 2600 words. Erotic Couplings


That is a lot so I'm happy to do this piecemeal. Feel free to cherry pick - perhaps I can get multiple editors working for me. Does that count as group sex?

I have no time considerations.

I am after a mild mannered grammar Nazi with an eye toward content and style. I hate it when I repeat a phrase or word too close together and I never met a comma I couldn't splice. My stuff is fairly clean and I am open to all sorts of editing/opinion. I have thick skin and appreciate constructive criticism.

Please let me know if you are interested.

Thanks!
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Old 10-31-2012, 06:15 AM   #2
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Might i/we get summaries?
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Old 10-31-2012, 09:07 PM   #3
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More info, coming up.

Bed Full of Pussy.
3900 words. Group Sex. FFM.
A man comes home to find his wife and her best friend in bed. He joins in.


I Tripped Down the Stairs...
3300 words. Erotic Couplings. Still working on the title.
A man fools around with his pregnant sister-in-law.


Number One.
4050 words. Erotic Couplings.
A woman recalls her top three cocks and tells some hot stories about Number One.


Gina at a Wedding.
5700 words. Erotic Couplings.
Gina and I attend a wedding, stealing away whenever possible for some hot fun. Part of a loose collection of stories about Gina (see In Charge, Gina & Brandon, etc.)


The Minotaur.
11,600 words. Non-human/mythical
I don't know what the hell this is. Mythical romance? More romance/adventure than porn, at least. This one may be way off track.


(In Charge ch. 1 is already posted.)
In Charge Ch. 2.
6300 words. Erotic Couplings.
Gina and I take turns being in charge of the action. This is Gina's first night. Being a little too shy to come out and say what she likes, she writes it down on some cards (with a hidden message.)

In Charge Ch. 3.
2600 words. Erotic Couplings
Gina and I take turns being in charge of the action. My second night starts rocky but ends with two bangs.

Is that better?

I have a pretty good Hot-to-Not ratio so hopefully you won't find my work too tedious.

Thanks!
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Old 10-31-2012, 10:22 PM   #4
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I'd do Bed Full of Pussy and The Minotaur. Sounds like scifi/fantasy.
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Old 11-29-2012, 07:58 PM   #5
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Hello out there! I still need an editor for most of these stories! Help! Help!
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